Nerothemajin
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Can anyone read my story and give me feedback?
I want to know your thoughts about it.
Title: F:Ran
Genres: Shonen( If you know what that is),Fantasy,Action/Adventure
Synopsis:
As the big bang emerged stars fell on the earth and the dust that those stars contained created life as we know it. Humans, decided to use this energy, as they found it very compatible with the human's physical capabilities.They named it Saku energy and as time passed, it became a strong weapon that was used by the swordsmen of the past.
Ran was a boy with a great dream, one of becoming a strong swordsman.
But being born with a weak body made him insecure of it and slowly he closed up to himself.
But after coming to "Tsurugi Academy" the academy of his dreams, he will learn his true limits and with the help of his friends he will be able to over come them.
but in all great stories things aren't that simple and many mysteries await.
Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/118034/fran/
I want to know your thoughts about it.
Title: F:Ran
Genres: Shonen( If you know what that is),Fantasy,Action/Adventure
Synopsis:
As the big bang emerged stars fell on the earth and the dust that those stars contained created life as we know it. Humans, decided to use this energy, as they found it very compatible with the human's physical capabilities.They named it Saku energy and as time passed, it became a strong weapon that was used by the swordsmen of the past.
Ran was a boy with a great dream, one of becoming a strong swordsman.
But being born with a weak body made him insecure of it and slowly he closed up to himself.
But after coming to "Tsurugi Academy" the academy of his dreams, he will learn his true limits and with the help of his friends he will be able to over come them.
but in all great stories things aren't that simple and many mysteries await.
Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/118034/fran/