i need thoughts on my novel.

[WolfKingChang]

My novel, specter days is a novel about a group of people called soul facilitators who interact with the dead, today i wrote chap 17, i really need feedback on the story cause i have no good or bad comments to know if im doing well, i post here and on royalroad, hope ull like my story and even harsh critic is welcomed, thanks a lot

 

[Paul_Tromba]

Could you post a link to the story?

Also, I thought and my thinker says yes for now.

 

[WolfKingChang]

Yes, here u go

Specter days.

Follow the journey of Luke in Dove town, a guy who suddenly obtained the ability to see ghosts, and was invited to join the soul facilitators, a group of interesting people who have a duty to help the ghosts depart to the afterworld. The story contains mystery and supernatural elements,...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[WolfKingChang]

My novel, specter days is a novel about a group of people called soul facilitators who interact with the dead, today i wrote chap 17, i really need feedback on the story cause i have no good or bad comments to know if im doing well, i post here and on royalroad, hope ull like my story and even harsh critic is welcomed, thanks a lot

Specter days.

Follow the journey of Luke in Dove town, a guy who suddenly obtained the ability to see ghosts, and was invited to join the soul facilitators, a group of interesting people who have a duty to help the ghosts depart to the afterworld. The story contains mystery and supernatural elements,...

www.scribblehub.com