I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

[OatMush]

Hello everyone, sorry for the late reviews, this thread is still going and I will catch up when I have some free time!

 

[fluffypie374]

Stop reading on chapter one on my story? Eternity Starts From His Seed

 

[DaisukeHanashi]

Check mine. Link is in my signature

 

[SleepingFox]

I’ve sort of been enjoying writing in a vacuum for a while and after accumulating a large backlog, decided to publish (*most) of what I’ve written so this morning.

As smut, I imagine that most people are likely going to be shy or reluctant to post reviews. I could really use a fresh viewer’s perspective, even if it is extremely simple review like I stopped reading on chapter 2 because I didn’t like [XYZ].

Daily World of Magic: An Elf’s Immortal Life | Scribble Hub

There’s always minor grammar issues and mistyped words lurking around in the story like tiny bugs. I’ve squashed most of them as I’ve proofread the story 7-8 times before publishing it, but every time I re-read it, I find more of the little critters to my endless annoyance.

 

[harrydouthwaite]

Okay, I think I'm finally ready for this. I apologize for deleting my request a few days ago, but I had a lot of work to do based on some other feedback I received.

Feelings and Fondness

In the mid-2000s, eleven-year-old Robin Brush lives in the commuter belt village of Stanstead Abbotts in Hertfordshire, England. He suffers constantly from being bullied, ridiculed, or misunderstood by almost everyone. Forced to live an isolated life as an outcast, he doesn't even have any...

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In it you will find themes from popular titles such as The Curious Incident Of The Dog In The Nighttime, Diary of a Wimpy Kid, and The Railway Children. As the protagonist is interested in railways and is young at heart, there are also references to anthropomorphic tales such as Thomas The Tank Engine and Cars.

I've just finished revamping the first three chapters. Hopefully you find it intriguing.

 

[twin_makes]

That is very cool to offer your honest review like that. I would love to hear your thoughts on my story, that is when you stopped reading (I hope English as a second language does not deter you) :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1019128/alchzard-world/

 

[lilwriter]

Wanna read Lady Ori Has a Dark Side?

 

[DJ_Rhaposdy]

I've been working on a fantasy/comedy adventure for fun. If that intrigues you, please check out my story. Title says it all:

Former Isekai Hero was Corrupted by His Over-Poweredness, and Now the People Need Me, a Prince of this World, to Defeat Him and Save Our Land

That boy was supposed to save our world from the wrath of the Demon King. And while the King is dead, an even worse threat has arisen: the boy himself! I don't know how he came to this world, but I'm going to be the one to take him out...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[MaitreyaGem]

Hello :D thank you for doing this thread! Please check out my story!

The Winds of Tepr

In the vast and volatile lands of Tepr, the Jabliu and Alinkar tribes, long-standing enemies, have forged an uneasy alliance. The price of peace? A union through matrimony between Naci, the fiery and ambitious daughter of Jabliu's chieftain, and the elusive heir of Alinkar. From the windswept...

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[GoodPerson]

Check mine. Link is in my signature

My guy, he said he's on mobile.
He's oblivious to your signatures, dummy.
I will not post my story for the moment, seems like you have more requests than your free time.

I'll check this thread back later, see if you're done reviewing the others' story

 

[Deleted member 156229]

I would love to hear your first impressions!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1028921/mankind-diaspora-the-trappist-gambit/

 

[DaisukeHanashi]

Check mine

 

[Deleted member 156316]

There are a lot of stories on this website and standing out among them is hard. When someone does click on your story most of the time they'll stop reading after the first few chapters or even after only the blurb. I will give your story a go and tell you when and why I stopped reading.
I'm not an experienced author so don't expect any technical explanations of what you've done wrong. I can only tell you about my subjective experience reading your novel and I'm opinionated. Many stories I've read are perfectly fine just too similar to something else I've read or not in a genre I like, so take my opinion with a grain of salt, I'm probably not your target audience.
I'll give everything submitted a go with no limits on content. I can pm if you want to be anonymous or else I'll post my review here.
I'll update the title when I've had enough. Until then, Keep Them Coming!
Edit: I also really enjoy reviewing, so if you're on the fence about submitting your story, do it!
Edit 2: I'm on mobile and can't see signatures, if you would be so kind to post a link to your story, that'd be appreciated.

Hello!

New writer here, mind if you can take a look at mine, oh and I also have side stories that go along with the plot as a type of 'in-depth or backstory explanation'

I'm not consistent with my upload schedule due to school and stuff though.

 

[FutaKay]

Hello.
I would appreciate your (or any) feedback on my story.
Thank you <3

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/981931/the-value-of-hard-work/

 

[christian.bradley]

I'd love it if you'd check mine out: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1037759/nanobots-murder-and-other-family-problems/.

 

[AspiringMaker]

Hello. I would love some feedback.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1039676/birth-of-a-cosmonar/

 

[SomePersonOfEarth]

If you are still interested in reading new stories and giving reviews, can you, please give mine a look?
Lost In The Multiverse | Scribble Hub
Lost In The Multiverse | Royal Road

 

[Nevafrost]

Ok,so...here is mine.Don't mind any criticism

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1052102/the-truth-is-mysterious/

 

[FlyingPotatoes]

As a new user here I would love to here your review. Please do try reading my work Dicera and tell me what is your opinion.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1051920/dicera/