nightshade.valentine
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Hey Everyone,
I am feeling frustrated to be honest. That is why I am asking for a feedback
First of all, yes indeed I am new to writing, in my mid-thirties, and I do write for fun.
I do think of my story and my characters almost all the time though. Sometimes I over think it though
In the last month, I have started publishing my light novel here in scribble. and at the beginning, I felt super happy to see that views are going up. But after reaching chapter 10 I realized that its only views and little reads. almost no subscribed readers, no favorites , and totally no comment.
My English is not native, but I literally spend hours editing. Before I publish I at least edit for 2 to 3 hours and even afterward I feel I am not happy with my English.
The energy and time I am putting in the story is really huge, somehow it is all wasted (except of me enjoying the writing, but who writes to himself/herself after all?)
So here is the deal, for the first 3 people that agree to give me feedback for the first five chapters, and spend their valuable time doing that. I will owe you a 3 Euro in Ko-Fi (or paypal whichever you prefer) :) which I will pay immediately. I know it is a very small amount, but it will hopefully get you a coffee while reading those chapters (if its boring haha) , and for me it will mean the world, as it will help me understand what I am doing wrong or right.
If you are interested, just comment "I will give feedback".
I am feeling frustrated to be honest. That is why I am asking for a feedback
First of all, yes indeed I am new to writing, in my mid-thirties, and I do write for fun.
I do think of my story and my characters almost all the time though. Sometimes I over think it though
In the last month, I have started publishing my light novel here in scribble. and at the beginning, I felt super happy to see that views are going up. But after reaching chapter 10 I realized that its only views and little reads. almost no subscribed readers, no favorites , and totally no comment.
My English is not native, but I literally spend hours editing. Before I publish I at least edit for 2 to 3 hours and even afterward I feel I am not happy with my English.
The energy and time I am putting in the story is really huge, somehow it is all wasted (except of me enjoying the writing, but who writes to himself/herself after all?)
So here is the deal, for the first 3 people that agree to give me feedback for the first five chapters, and spend their valuable time doing that. I will owe you a 3 Euro in Ko-Fi (or paypal whichever you prefer) :) which I will pay immediately. I know it is a very small amount, but it will hopefully get you a coffee while reading those chapters (if its boring haha) , and for me it will mean the world, as it will help me understand what I am doing wrong or right.
If you are interested, just comment "I will give feedback".
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