LilTV1155
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The story just started moving on its first few chapters. I am working on Chapter 5.
I just want to know if the dialogue flow and descriptions of the setting including the( - switches - ) have cause any conflicts with the story flow aside from hunting for grammatical errors and misspellings.
Like do I need to reformat the dialogues?
Or does the story sound have a sense of humors in it?
Please disregard the numbers above the section numbers, those are just my way of tracking the dates.
Thank you for responding to this feedback thread.
The story just started moving on its first few chapters. I am working on Chapter 5.
I just want to know if the dialogue flow and descriptions of the setting including the( - switches - ) have cause any conflicts with the story flow aside from hunting for grammatical errors and misspellings.
Like do I need to reformat the dialogues?
Or does the story sound have a sense of humors in it?
Please disregard the numbers above the section numbers, those are just my way of tracking the dates.
Thank you for responding to this feedback thread.