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Just.Another.Adult.

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currently seeking feedback on my ongoing realistic isekai, so if that's something you'd be interested in, then have at it~
if you're sticking to first chapter impressions then CHAPTER 0 is effectively the prologue, atmosphere setting/tension building stuff.
CHAPTER 1 was meant to be more of the punchy grab you by the lapels start for those wanting to skip the slow burn, but that needs working on still.
anyway, thanks for having a look if you do, if not then any suggestions for improvement before you'd be down to review are more than welcome!

I, Human! - or what it's really like to get isekai'd~
 

Omniscient

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Can you review mine books pls? Like is here-https://www.scribblehub.com/series/612268/wrath-of-reality/'
Can you pls tell me should I change my writing style?
 

AdOtherwise

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Hey all,

I am looking for pool of stories to review for a youtube channel I'm starting that will heavily feature online serials from Scribble Hub and Royal Road. I've got some good ideas for ways to engage with the stories, and now I just need the stories. I have my two videos planned and will do a relook at the first chapter from my favorite chapter from the "First Chapter Feedback" and then a second review highlighting the work as a whole.

Past that, I'm planning on doing a mixture of first chapter feedback, spotlights, analysis, comparisons, "Bingo", and some type of live feedback/ editing. So go ahead and leave your story or recommend a story you'd like to see covered, it's genre, and how you'd like me to interact with it. I make no guarantees that I'll use it or I'll use it for the type of video you'd prefer, but it can't hurt.

Previous participation in my threads doesn't matter, and if anything, makes it easier. CHANNEL

Latest Episode: Isaac Unknown, Full Review!

WRNA: A Desolate Life
WRNA: WORM
I'll add to the pile of works, https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/ and https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/79766/demonic-fate
Lowly Ascent is a low fantasy-ish story involving manipulation and revenge, while also seeking freedom. Demonic Decent, the Mc is just a straight-up monster, only have one chapter now because I'm still loading up on chapters, but if you looking to review the first chapter of a villain story, that would be one. Interact however you wish, I'm interested in your thoughts.
 

KDBooks97

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I know you've done a review for my book, The Miserably Macabre tales of Luna Samuels before, but I'm curious if you've put it in any of your videos before? You definitely don't have to, but I'd be interested in participating if you'd be interested.
 
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