Just.Another.Adult.
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currently seeking feedback on my ongoing realistic isekai, so if that's something you'd be interested in, then have at it~
if you're sticking to first chapter impressions then CHAPTER 0 is effectively the prologue, atmosphere setting/tension building stuff.
CHAPTER 1 was meant to be more of the punchy grab you by the lapels start for those wanting to skip the slow burn, but that needs working on still.
anyway, thanks for having a look if you do, if not then any suggestions for improvement before you'd be down to review are more than welcome!
I, Human! - or what it's really like to get isekai'd~
if you're sticking to first chapter impressions then CHAPTER 0 is effectively the prologue, atmosphere setting/tension building stuff.
CHAPTER 1 was meant to be more of the punchy grab you by the lapels start for those wanting to skip the slow burn, but that needs working on still.
anyway, thanks for having a look if you do, if not then any suggestions for improvement before you'd be down to review are more than welcome!
I, Human! - or what it's really like to get isekai'd~
I, Human!
We've all dreamed of starring in our own isekai, but how long would you survive? Transported to another world, the only human surrounded by monsters, no one to turn to for help... this isn't just your average cut and paste by the number ecchi harem shounen comedy adventure. I, Human!...
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