Lumberbot
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So I have a bunch of paragraphs here, and I'm struggling trying to find ways to make the structure pop out, I'm not really that adepts at English, as I mainly relies solely on instinct alone and auto correct using the markor app as my writing app, there's a lot of grammatical mistakes there I probably wouldn't known. any helps, helps even how little it is, I thank you for advance. also I don't know how to use those options things.
The vast expanse and stories told within are an ephemeral moment, however amidst such thoughts people of sagacious mind could ebulliently discern opulent wisdom and the pernicious ragged path, permitting within each crevices we called life.
The tattered gargantuan structure indefinitely spreads outward into the heaven above enshrouded in a cloud ocean, which waves ripples brushing against the structure, built in a rough rectangular chiselled boulders an unnatural splendour amidst unmoving mountains and the howling gentle cold breeze ambience, weaving through everything. Prominent strains, cracks, missing parts and the weathered stones beneath melted into cushions-like forms, unable to withstand such burden, littered amongst the structure surface. There, before the edifice architecture, stood a robed individual hunched in heavy clothing, at the uneven path littered with smooth pebbles and a ragged gravels, seemingly an overgrown lumps foldings, adorned in opulent golden scriptures enveloping barely discernible fabrics woven into mellow strains. The figure sluggishly lifted a finger frontward onto the decrepit wall, sleeve hung loosely.
The figure's hoarse voice escaped through the enshrouded hood, barely audible fluctuating in an unpredictable pattern, latched upon the atmosphere creeping ever so tardily, each word reverberated upon the structure wall in response, it rumbles, sending ash and brittle rocks pelting deep onto the ground below.
The vast expanse and stories told within are an ephemeral moment, however amidst such thoughts people of sagacious mind could ebulliently discern opulent wisdom and the pernicious ragged path, permitting within each crevices we called life.
The tattered gargantuan structure indefinitely spreads outward into the heaven above enshrouded in a cloud ocean, which waves ripples brushing against the structure, built in a rough rectangular chiselled boulders an unnatural splendour amidst unmoving mountains and the howling gentle cold breeze ambience, weaving through everything. Prominent strains, cracks, missing parts and the weathered stones beneath melted into cushions-like forms, unable to withstand such burden, littered amongst the structure surface. There, before the edifice architecture, stood a robed individual hunched in heavy clothing, at the uneven path littered with smooth pebbles and a ragged gravels, seemingly an overgrown lumps foldings, adorned in opulent golden scriptures enveloping barely discernible fabrics woven into mellow strains. The figure sluggishly lifted a finger frontward onto the decrepit wall, sleeve hung loosely.
The figure's hoarse voice escaped through the enshrouded hood, barely audible fluctuating in an unpredictable pattern, latched upon the atmosphere creeping ever so tardily, each word reverberated upon the structure wall in response, it rumbles, sending ash and brittle rocks pelting deep onto the ground below.