Writing Planning out a story that makes fun of NTR, any hot takes you want to see?

[K5Rakitan]

I want to see it end in polyamory when everyone realizes they don't have to do monogamy just because it's a societal norm.

 

[Vnator]

I don't think you fully grasp the concept of cheating/adultery. The world you're describing has no relation to neither. Cheating is a forbidden fruit. Once you remove the consequences behind it and make it that easily attainable and accepted, then it is no different than a regular relationship - there is no thrill behind it. NTR seeks out this thrill on either sides.

In the situation you described, the MC gets cucked. That's all of the NTR element to the story. If he fucks anybody else, well, it's fine since everyone else is okay with it. And unless the MC changes his views and mindset, he'd be constantly getting cucked by his girlfriend since he's the only one who perceives it as such.

I might be reading a bit too much in this, though.

That makes sense. The world kind of sits on a weird position where cheating is the norm, but it's still looked down upon. I don't really know how to get that idea across in the synopsis. And I'm not really exploring the NTR aspect much beyond that it exists around him and he doesn't like it much, and I'm looking into ideas on how to make fun of those aspects.

 

[greyblob]

That makes sense. The world kind of sits on a weird position where cheating is the norm, but it's still looked down upon. I don't really know how to get that idea across in the synopsis. And I'm not really exploring the NTR aspect much beyond that it exists around him and he doesn't like it much, and I'm looking into ideas on how to make fun of those aspects.

Not sure how you'd make that setting interesting, but if you're willing to abandon it and you still want to make some NTR parody, I have a couple more interesting ideas.

 

[Vnator]

Not sure how you'd make that setting interesting, but if you're willing to abandon it and you still want to make some NTR parody, I have a couple more interesting ideas.

What you and other commenters have said gave me a lot of ideas on how to build the world, and the main interesting parts are from the MC's interactions with others and the witnessed ramifications of what such a world is like through his eyes. To that effect, I'm open to taking more interesting ideas to see what I can spin with them

 

[greyblob]

What you and other commenters have said gave me a lot of ideas on how to build the world, and the main interesting parts are from the MC's interactions with others and the witnessed ramifications of what such a world is like through his eyes. To that effect, I'm open to taking more interesting ideas to see what I can spin with them

If you want to make a parody, you need to find a common situation in the genre and take an expected turn or a spin off. I'll give you an example. An MC with a fuck'em all system and since his level is very low he only finds the broken-down cumdumpers which most girls in a NTR hentai eventually turn into. The catch is, our MC is a decent person and decides to help the poor girls. You could stop it there or go even further with having the girls indebted to him and form a cult. Every once in a while he adds another 'sister' to the group and they serve/worship him.

Another example, you could have the MC walk in on his gf getting fucked and once she notices him she smiles or some shit. Then, he pulls out a gun, offs both people, and runs away. He's also given a system, but instead of fucking people, he goes around offing cheaters. The more ridiculous the concept the better.

 

[Lloyd]

Probably the best parody would be to construct a meta-narrative where it seems to readers the author got NTRed and has gone crazy. Like have the MC be a self insert that uses his powers to NTR other NTRers and maybe have him brutally kill them or something hypocritical, while at the same time doing every girl he comes across.

 

[BenJepheneT]

Probably the best parody would be to construct a meta-narrative where it seems to readers the author got NTRed and has gone crazy. Like have the MC be a self insert that uses his powers to NTR other NTRers and maybe have him brutally kill them or something hypocritical, while at the same time doing every girl he comes across.

there's already a full genre for it called revenge porn. it's about as satisfying as you described it.

 

[Lloyd]

there's already a full genre for it called revenge porn. it's about as satisfying as you described it.

Wtf that isn't even remotely the same.

 

[BenJepheneT]

Wtf that isn't even remotely the same.

that meta-narrative isn't something special. it's just a guy who got fucked over deciding to fuck over the same people that fuck him over and fuck their loved ones on the side. that's exactly revenge porn. it's not an original idea.

 

[Lloyd]

that meta-narrative isn't something special. it's just a guy who got fucked over deciding to fuck over the same people that fuck him over and fuck their loved ones on the side. that's exactly revenge porn. it's not an original idea.

So? Lol

 

[Vnator]

If you want to make a parody, you need to find a common situation in the genre and take an expected turn or a spin off. I'll give you an example. An MC with a fuck'em all system and since his level is very low he only finds the broken-down cumdumpers which most girls in a NTR hentai eventually turn into. The catch is, our MC is a decent person and decides to help the poor girls. You could stop it there or go even further with having the girls indebted to him and form a cult. Every once in a while he adds another 'sister' to the group and they serve/worship him.

Another example, you could have the MC walk in on his gf getting fucked and once she notices him she smiles or some shit. Then, he pulls out a gun, offs both people, and runs away. He's also given a system, but instead of fucking people, he goes around offing cheaters. The more ridiculous the concept the better.

That sounds pretty hilarious! I think I'll include a bunch of other system users who are themselves self-inserts who do things like these. I have one who's trying to become a politician with their high charisma, why not have someone try and form a cult? Great idea!

 

[BenJepheneT]

So? Lol

so it's exactly as i said, revenge porn.

 

[Lloyd]

so it's exactly as i said, revenge porn.

Revenge porn is when you release nudes of your ex to get back at them.

 

[BenJepheneT]

Revenge porn is when you release nudes of your ex to get back at them.

Wtf that isn't even remotely the same

 

[Lloyd]

Wtf that isn't even remotely the same

Exactly