Makkis_Literal
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Anyone wanna review swap with me? Now I know that this is on a different site, but I will definitely do yours on here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/perk-mage_28479617200317205
Do you really come here to ask for review for a story you stole? @GMSJakers this guys steal your book.Anyone wanna review swap with me? Now I know that this is on a different site, but I will definitely do yours on here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/perk-mage_28479617200317205
Oh this gon be goodDo you really come here to ask for review for a story you stole? @GMSJakers this guys steal your book.
For the next time, you can click on an image to resize it.ScribbleHub Version (GMSJakers)
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I'm on phone, it's quite difficult to resize it when my fingers are big to mess it up.For the next time, you can click on an image to resize it.
no it's fine.I'm on phone, it's quite difficult to resize it when my fingers are big to mess it up.
I can remove my thread reply instead.
Ok, just one thing I noticed from your synopsis:Anyone wanna review swap with me? Now I know that this is on a different site, but I will definitely do yours on here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/perk-mage_28479617200317205
Wait, it is stolen?Do you really come here to ask for review for a story you stole? @GMSJakers this guys steal your book.
Mage Academy
Ok, just one thing I noticed from your synopsis:
You give the whole plot away. Like, I found out what his special powers were and what his world was like without even having to open the book. I made this mistake too, and had a hard time getting readers. Now, you have 3k words, so that is not the case for you, but I think you should ask questions in the synopsis, or at least make it so that the reader won't find as much from it as I did.
That said, your story looks promising. I don't have much time, but I think I can manage to read one chapter per day from it for a while. You don't need to read any of my stuff, it is ok.
Happy writing!
Wait, it is stolen?
Hm, then I should read the real thing. Can you send me a link @Sleds
Here the link for webnovel : https://www.webnovel.com/book/spy-mage-system_23458187905604405Mage Academy
I really wish the OP would clarify what is happening.
The story they are asking to be 'review swapped' is longer.
I want to know where those chapters are coming from.
Yep. That's what I guessed. Good luck in your endeavours.Guys fun fact, those are the same people. I'm GMS Jakers, and Makkis_Liberal, those are two different accounts owned by me.
I've abandoned the GMS Jakers one and is trying to create a rebooted version on the other one, just to clear things up.
Yeah, I'll fix that.Ok, just one thing I noticed from your synopsis:
You give the whole plot away. Like, I found out what his special powers were and what his world was like without even having to open the book. I made this mistake too, and had a hard time getting readers. Now, you have 3k words, so that is not the case for you, but I think you should ask questions in the synopsis, or at least make it so that the reader won't find as much from it as I did.
That said, your story looks promising. I don't have much time, but I think I can manage to read one chapter per day from it for a while. You don't need to read any of my stuff, it is ok.
Happy writing!
Wait, it is stolen?
Hm, then I should read the real thing. Can you send me a link @Sleds