Reviews for the Folks.

[Deleted member 29316]

All right, I'll go ahead and add you folks. My queue has gotten longer now but I'll work through it, so do be patient with me. I promise I'll get to everyone lol.

Thanks for your efforts!

 

[Redbow112]

Do you mind if you could add mine as well?

Ragnarok in Another World

Patrolling through the forest where her village resides, Hilda finds a boy unconscious on the ground with a weird tattoo on his right forearm. Deciding that it was fine, Hilda brings to the boy back to her village. Unbeknownst to her that the boy is a monster who destroyed his...

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[BenJepheneT]

@Sii you are batshit insane and I fucking love it. Have a follow.

 

[Moonpearl]

Are short stories alright? I have three in one collection, if you're happy to review it: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/148315/muirgen-amp-other-tales/

 

[Sii]

Do you mind if you could add mine as well?

Ragnarok in Another World

Patrolling through the forest where her village resides, Hilda finds a boy unconscious on the ground with a weird tattoo on his right forearm. Deciding that it was fine, Hilda brings to the boy back to her village. Unbeknownst to her that the boy is a monster who destroyed his...

www.scribblehub.com

I've added yours, I'll add it to my list

@Sii you are batshit insane and I fucking love it. Have a follow.

Thank you, kind sir. Just don't tell too many people, it'll hurt my image.

Are short stories alright? I have three in one collection, if you're happy to review it: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/148315/muirgen-amp-other-tales/

Short stories are perfectly fine with me. I'll see about giving an impression about each one and giving my overall impression for the collection of shorts.

 

[Vickusoftears]

Id love a review if you have the chance;

Resurrection: I died and came back as a 3000 year old vampire!

A young business man dies, and in the process of crossing over, his soul accidentally drifts where it doesn't belong. The new body he's acquired? A 3,000 year old vampire, charmingly named Vampir. At least he's handsome. And rich. What will he find in this new world as he seeks a...

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[Sii]

Id love a review if you have the chance;

Resurrection: I died and came back as a 3000 year old vampire!

A young business man dies, and in the process of crossing over, his soul accidentally drifts where it doesn't belong. The new body he's acquired? A 3,000 year old vampire, charmingly named Vampir. At least he's handsome. And rich. What will he find in this new world as he seeks a...

www.scribblehub.com

Sure, I'll go ahead and add you to the queue

 

[BenJepheneT]

All right folks, this is my first time doing this so bear with me.

I am offering reviews for your stories, can be in progress or completed. If you have a lot of chapters, I'll give it a good go, at least 10 chapters so I can properly form an opinion. I won't read all the way through, for the sake of time and because I also have a day job that takes up most of my time.

I will offer feedback, as far as what I liked/disliked and what I thought worked really well in your favor.
I'll steer clear of offering any feedback on style choices and general grammar unless that's something you'd like me to keep in mind for you.
If I don't think I have anything to offer in a review, I'd be happy to DM it to you. I'm not a mean person and I don't think it's productive to go around leaving scathing reviews on other authors works. If you still want me to post it in your reviews then I can.

Since I've never offered reviews for others I don't know what my turn around time is gonna be, so bear with me. I've only written a few reviews on RR so I'm using this as a chance to enhance myself as an objective reviewer.
I'll treat this as a first come, first served thing and I'll update with the list as I go along.

I will say that I'm not asking for anything in return, if you want to check out my story it'll be linked in my sig. But it's not a requirement that you do, I'm just here offering reviews for my fellow authors.

Current reading list-
- Saileri: I Own A Brothel In Another World - Completed
- Assurbanipal: Schwarz is my destiny - Completed
- Romance: New Return of the Condor Heroes - Completed
- TachimeSan: Aim to be a Noblewoman's Butler
- LostLibrarian: The Lone Macaw
- Tejoka: Reverse Reincarnation
- ConTroll: The Terran Traveler
- K5Rakitan: Kaiba's Prostitute
- HURGMCGURG: Stone Man
- sushirollw: The Tyrant Duchess
- KyoruS: Lord of The Ancient
- Draculus: Masquerade of Souls
- HansTrondheim: The Human Saint is Bored
- SparkNorkx: Star Ghost Isekai Agency
- Redbow112: Ragnarok in Another World
- Moonpearl: Muirgen & Other Tales
- Vickusoftears: Resurrection: I died and came back as a 3000 year old vampire!

Fuck it I'mma jump in the bandwagon as well, since my story wasn't really fully reviewed by you back then

Caninstinct

Shiro believes he's been sent to the wrong school. Rormund Academy: home to only the best of the best. A school so exclusive even its name remains elusive to the public. An establishment where only the wealthiest, smartest, and most athletic students of the world reside. Shiro exhibits none of...

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[Vickusoftears]

Sure, I'll go ahead and add you to the queue

Danke

 

[Sii]

Fuck it I'mma jump in the bandwagon as well, since my story wasn't really fully reviewed by you back then

Caninstinct

Shiro believes he's been sent to the wrong school. Rormund Academy: home to only the best of the best. A school so exclusive even its name remains elusive to the public. An establishment where only the wealthiest, smartest, and most athletic students of the world reside. Shiro exhibits none of...

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That's not fair at all, I'm already biased lol. I'll add you, I just remembered I didn't even do a proper one for you.

 

[cc.mscreeps18]

Title: Warfare Between Lost Hearts

Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/152366/warfare-between-lost-hearts/

Genre:
/Focus/
Action; War; Drama; Romance; Science Fiction

/Side/
Family; Friendship; Psychological

Grade: Rated T

Story Description:
During the long awaited war crisis in Manila, every legal-aged inhabitant, specifically voters, are required to work for the government in order to reestablish the living land and battle against a mass terrorist attack. The country where the terrorist originated are still in the unknown and under further research. Juveniles haven’t got any choice yet to live by themselves. Building a town, planting food crops, hunting animals and even manslaughter is required in the generation by means of survival. Keisha and his brother, Jaden, are left alone haunted by vicious brutes hiding from the shadows. Until then they found hope wherein they can rule over and persist the ongoing catastrophe.

 

[UYScuti]

Do you mind checking mine when you have a chance? Not necessarily asking for a review, but any feedback or thoughts would be appreciated.

Thanks

Stellar Winds

Blurb:

After sending generational ships to habitable systems within 20 light-years, humans became an interstellar species. But the vast distances separating colonies left them disconnected from each other. A real, human empire remained impossible, and fractures in their unity formed.

Ella woke up in an unfamiliar room wearing someone else's face, covered in blood. As she struggles to reconcile the two sets of memories and emotions racing through her mind, she searches for clues on her father's murder. But he wasn't who she thought he was, and neither is she.

Jerok wanted nothing more than to live free from gravity's restraints, so when his father died and left him enough money to buy a ship, he went independent. Now, he travels the system with his childhood friends and takes any job that pays enough to keep them floating. However, after rumors of abnormal Union activities reach his ears, he takes notice of the changes.

Together, Ella and Jerok must unmask a conspiracy that threatens to reshape humanity, before it's too late.

 

[Sii]

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Title: Warfare Between Lost Hearts

Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/152366/warfare-between-lost-hearts/

Genre:
/Focus/
Action; War; Drama; Romance; Science Fiction

/Side/
Family; Friendship; Psychological

Grade: Rated T

Story Description:
During the long awaited war crisis in Manila, every legal-aged inhabitant, specifically voters, are required to work for the government in order to reestablish the living land and battle against a mass terrorist attack. The country where the terrorist originated are still in the unknown and under further research. Juveniles haven’t got any choice yet to live by themselves. Building a town, planting food crops, hunting animals and even manslaughter is required in the generation by means of survival. Keisha and his brother, Jaden, are left alone haunted by vicious brutes hiding from the shadows. Until then they found hope wherein they can rule over and persist the ongoing catastrophe.

Do you mind checking mine when you have a chance? Not necessarily asking for a review, but any feedback or thoughts would be appreciated.

Thanks

Stellar Winds

Blurb:

After sending generational ships to habitable systems within 20 light-years, humans became an interstellar species. But the vast distances separating colonies left them disconnected from each other. A real, human empire remained impossible, and fractures in their unity formed.

Ella woke up in an unfamiliar room wearing someone else's face, covered in blood. As she struggles to reconcile the two sets of memories and emotions racing through her mind, she searches for clues on her father's murder. But he wasn't who she thought he was, and neither is she.

Jerok wanted nothing more than to live free from gravity's restraints, so when his father died and left him enough money to buy a ship, he went independent. Now, he travels the system with his childhood friends and takes any job that pays enough to keep them floating. However, after rumors of abnormal Union activities reach his ears, he takes notice of the changes.

Together, Ella and Jerok must unmask a conspiracy that threatens to reshape humanity, before it's too late.

Cool, I'll add you guys to my list. Again, the list has gotten pretty long but I'll be working through it as best as I can.

 

[Nerothemajin]

If you have time to spare please check out my work.

F:Ran

It's an Action/Adventure story about swordsmanship.

 

[Sii]

If you have time to spare please check out my work.

F:Ran

It's an Action/Adventure story about swordsmanship.

No problem. I'll add you to the list.

 

[Pyris_Silver]

Story: Avenger Of Destruction

My story is kinda slow-paced, but I'd still like to hear your opinion if you have time.

 

[Deleted member 29448]

Hi! I’ve just stumbled upon this very lovely thread, and I hope you have some time to review my story. It currently has ten chapters. Although my story is interactive, I’d like to know if readers can still enjoy the chapters where polls are closed. I’d really appreciate it!

Reaching Zenith [Interactive Story]

Zenith X is a twenty-five year old, crippled man with the worst luck. He even unknowingly traded away his life for a small bit of glory. As he enters through Death’s doors, a nearby person turns back the clock on Zenith’s miserable life. Zenith opens his eyes to...

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[LazyPanda]

Please check out my novel, with a pinch of shamelessness.

Reborn as a Symbiote (Hiatus until further notice)

Hiatus: I apologize for the late update on progress. I have took a larger bite than I ought to from this novel, trying to incorporate many types of systems into one novel is a lot harder than I thought. I will begin anew from small stories that will be later...

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[Sii]

Story: Avenger Of Destruction

My story is kinda slow-paced, but I'd still like to hear your opinion if you have time.

Hi! I’ve just stumbled upon this very lovely thread, and I hope you have some time to review my story. It currently has ten chapters. Although my story is interactive, I’d like to know if readers can still enjoy the chapters where polls are closed. I’d really appreciate it!

Reaching Zenith [Interactive Story]

Zenith X is a twenty-five year old, crippled man with the worst luck. He even unknowingly traded away his life for a small bit of glory. As he enters through Death’s doors, a nearby person turns back the clock on Zenith’s miserable life. Zenith opens his eyes to...

www.scribblehub.com

Please check out my novel, with a pinch of shamelessness.

Reborn as a Symbiote (Hiatus until further notice)

Hiatus: I apologize for the late update on progress. I have took a larger bite than I ought to from this novel, trying to incorporate many types of systems into one novel is a lot harder than I thought. I will begin anew from small stories that will be later...

www.scribblehub.com

All right, I'll add you guys to the list. Just as a forewarning, the list is pretty long now. But, I will be working through and getting to everyone as quickly as my limited time permits.