Scaver's Free Feedback thread.

[Scaver]

Since everyone is doing it, I shall take part in this ordeal too!
Now, you just have to give me the link and I will check it out sometime in the future. Dont expect quick response. I will try to check in every weekend or something!
There aren't any restrictions other than no smut whatsover and yeah thats it!
Tada~

 

[Slays_The_Crusader]

Here's mine, do as you please.

A Merc’s Guide to Mercing

Ah, being a Mercenary, it's like being a soldier except more fun, and you don't have to care about silly things like 'not blowing up a children's hospital' Follow a team of ten totally unprofessional soldiers of fortune as people throw money at them to solve tasks that range from...

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[Rosewater15]

Here is mine, it's pretty short~

Letters of Compunction

Note: If this book makes you very confused, that's normal. Just keep reading... Easter is the second prince of the Northern Kingdom, the spy for the royal family. The queen digs herself into a predicament, and Easter finds himself investigating a case with too many leads but no evidence to...

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[Ge-O-Fey]

Hellossu!
Here's my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/812971/infinity-seed/
It only has 4 chapters for now.
Thanks for reading!

 

[dummycake]

I dropped it as soon as saw the MC is female. Sorry, but I don't read books written by or about women. TLDR, fuck Ayn Rand.

Who are you talking to

 

[Lloyd]

Who are you talking to

Anyone who will listen

 

[LunaSoltaer]

Who are you talking to

Ayn Rand, apparently.

 

[dummycake]

Anyone who will listen

I feel you my dude

except for the woman part

 

[SummerSweetTea]

Gemstone Princess: The Rise of Amalia

Gemstone Princess: The Rise of Amalia is a magical adventure that takes Amalia from the non-magical world of Elca to the magical Lita. When a dark curse crosses the boundaries between worlds and impacts Amalia's village, she learns that the curse is looking for her. The only way to stop...

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[AdOtherwise]

Since everyone is doing it, I shall take part in this ordeal too!
Now, you just have to give me the link and I will check it out sometime in the future. Dont expect quick response. I will try to check in every weekend or something!
There aren't any restrictions other than no smut whatsover and yeah thats it!
Tada~

Lowly Ascent

Within a desolate realm, where discarded worlds were stitched together, a rupture tore open, releasing a small child into this fragmented expanse. Above him, the sky revealed three eerie moons, while an ominous black mass loomed ominously in their wake. Disoriented and engulfed by a putrid...

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Thanks!

 

[RyujiSakamata]

you can check one of my works

 

[HelloHound]

For Want of A House

Waking up is always a difficult part of anyone's day- it's even worse if you wake up inside some squalid room to spit out mysterious black cubes in a land you are not familiar with. Now imagine what Sybil's going through. Watch this short and tempered child grow, seeking a...

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acquired taste etc etc

 

[fantasyretreat]

Would be glad if you could check mine out as well.

Dark One [A Progression Fantasy]

Dark One is set in the kingdom of Vorthe, a land that has earned its peace and stability as a result of the efforts and sacrifices of past heroes. But alas, calamity draws near! A being of unearthly hunger for chaos and destruction, which leaves ghost cities in its wake —...

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[Nobody_12]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/844886/introvert-fell-into-a-novel-as-a-simp/.


Currently-10 chapters.

 

[Jaymi]

it's a short read, but try it out when you've got the time!

Girlguide: A Girl’s Guide To Writing Female Characters!

Kai, an aspiring light novel author, has always had his path to success hindered by his inability to write female characters. However, everything changes when he wakes up one day as a young girl. This change becomes his chance to gain a deeper understanding of women, hoping to take his...

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