Short story :Merry Christmas

[Dnhelo]

I've posted this short story about Santa , can someone please say if it's good?

Loving Holidays

Short stories of 350 words each by dnhelo They're made based on holidays and seasons, if you have suggestions, please tell me. I'll try my best to make your ideas come true.(unless I dislike or can't come up with a good storyline for the theme) -_-_-_-_-_...

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[K5Rakitan]

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