TheEldritchGod
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TL/DR: If you could provide me with some pointers on how to write people as friends and how they act, that'd be great.
I've hit a bit of a wall. I'm trying to figure out the relationships with the MC and his friends, but I don't understand this "friends" thing.
And no, I'm not joking. Never had any. Basically got the crap beat out of me for about ten years during public school, went into college, and made some "friends", but they were friends as long as I had money. With the exception of a very limited number of people, just about everyone I have trusted has betrayed me, or someone I cared about. Basically, I have relatives, clients, and co-workers, but as far as "friends" go, I suppose I don't have any. Yes, talking to people on the internet is a relationship, but that's more of an acquaintance than a friendship.
Part of it is me, I have a hard time maintaining relationships because I just... drift off. I have spent so much time alone being forced to survive by myself that I simply cannot rely on others. I'm not angry, but neither am I happy. I guess I'm just vaguely... sad/numb about the whole thing. So when it comes to my writing, I've reached the part where things should be improving for the MC and I really don't know how to handle it.
I'm not blackpilled where "everyone is selfish" or that sort of thing. I know that's nonsense. I just don't have any experience with anyone who has your back or cares about you for any reason other than because of what you do for them. I suppose I have had people care about me from time to time over the years, but I simply couldn't understand. You'd think having been the subject of relentless torture for a decade would make me crave friendship, but it honestly means nothing to me. I remember this one person who I helped as a client, and afterward, they kept in contact and I think they were trying to be my friend, but I honestly found it more annoying to have to socially interact.
I couldn't see the point. I wasn't having any fun. I suppose that was it, I felt like it was a psychic drain on me. I had gotten so used to being alone and having to handle everything myself and never depending on someone, an actual attempt to be friends with me felt more like an attack than anything else. Like I was being drained of my time and energy. The only time I seem to enjoy myself in a group is when it's some sort of group project and we are working towards a goal.
The few times I really, TRULY needed someone to help me, every time, they thought about themselves first. I was TOLD, you can call on me for help, but when I really needed it, and left myself open and said, "I'm in pain. I need help." the response was... well... let's just say that at best the response was, "BUT WHAT ABOUT ME?" and at worst, my weakness was used later used against me. I've just learned the hard way that someone like me is not someone who is apparently worthy of "unconditional love". And no, don't get all weird on me. That's just the way the world works. It's fine. I accept it and I've moved on.
So I really can't figure out how to write a group of friends. It should be easy, but I just can't do it. I don't have a frame of reference. I can't... relate? I dunno. I feel like I'm spinning my wheels, here. I tried going in the opposite direction and said to myself, "What would I want from the people who bullied me?" Like, if one of them was here right now, what would I say? And... The answer is... nothing.
If they didn't have any remorse, there would be no point. If they did feel it, how could they do anything to fix it? If they said "sorry", it wouldn't mean anything. If they tried to make me happy, I don't even know how they could. I can't think of anything that would make me happy, in that situation. I suppose I'd just want to say, "Yeah, you made me an emotional cripple. Nothing to do about it now." Then wander off. I rather think prolonged contact would just... be draining.
So if I can't even figure out what sort of interaction I'd want from my enemies, how the hell am I supposed to figure out what friends like? Like... it'd be the opposite, but I don't have anything to uno reverse. Even looking up guides on how to write it, they give me the general pointers, but they tell me how to MAKE friends, not what friends DO. I can find plenty of guides on how to cynically manipulate people, but not on how to just... be someone's friend. Like... after they become friends, what happens?
I KNOW how to manipulate people, already. I'm trying to write someone LIKABLE, not a manipulative bastard. I know how to get inside someone's head. I know how to get people to come around to my point of view. I have no idea how just be someone people would want to hang around. It feels like being a 'likable friendly guy' is just being a manipulative bastard, except you have a desire for people to be happy and you just put in a lot of continuous effort, but I can't help but think that shouldn't be friendly come... easily?
I look up examples and they... just don't make any sense to me. Take Harry Potter, There were three close friends, right? But it always felt... wrong to me. Maybe it's because Harry was such a self-insert that I just couldn't relate to him? Like any Mary Sue character, people just Love the MC, except for the bad guys. If you hate the MC, you are clearly evil. I dunno... It's hard to explain.
Am I making sense?
TL/DR: If you could provide me with some pointers on how to write people as friends and how they act, that'd be great.
I've hit a bit of a wall. I'm trying to figure out the relationships with the MC and his friends, but I don't understand this "friends" thing.
And no, I'm not joking. Never had any. Basically got the crap beat out of me for about ten years during public school, went into college, and made some "friends", but they were friends as long as I had money. With the exception of a very limited number of people, just about everyone I have trusted has betrayed me, or someone I cared about. Basically, I have relatives, clients, and co-workers, but as far as "friends" go, I suppose I don't have any. Yes, talking to people on the internet is a relationship, but that's more of an acquaintance than a friendship.
Part of it is me, I have a hard time maintaining relationships because I just... drift off. I have spent so much time alone being forced to survive by myself that I simply cannot rely on others. I'm not angry, but neither am I happy. I guess I'm just vaguely... sad/numb about the whole thing. So when it comes to my writing, I've reached the part where things should be improving for the MC and I really don't know how to handle it.
I'm not blackpilled where "everyone is selfish" or that sort of thing. I know that's nonsense. I just don't have any experience with anyone who has your back or cares about you for any reason other than because of what you do for them. I suppose I have had people care about me from time to time over the years, but I simply couldn't understand. You'd think having been the subject of relentless torture for a decade would make me crave friendship, but it honestly means nothing to me. I remember this one person who I helped as a client, and afterward, they kept in contact and I think they were trying to be my friend, but I honestly found it more annoying to have to socially interact.
I couldn't see the point. I wasn't having any fun. I suppose that was it, I felt like it was a psychic drain on me. I had gotten so used to being alone and having to handle everything myself and never depending on someone, an actual attempt to be friends with me felt more like an attack than anything else. Like I was being drained of my time and energy. The only time I seem to enjoy myself in a group is when it's some sort of group project and we are working towards a goal.
The few times I really, TRULY needed someone to help me, every time, they thought about themselves first. I was TOLD, you can call on me for help, but when I really needed it, and left myself open and said, "I'm in pain. I need help." the response was... well... let's just say that at best the response was, "BUT WHAT ABOUT ME?" and at worst, my weakness was used later used against me. I've just learned the hard way that someone like me is not someone who is apparently worthy of "unconditional love". And no, don't get all weird on me. That's just the way the world works. It's fine. I accept it and I've moved on.
So I really can't figure out how to write a group of friends. It should be easy, but I just can't do it. I don't have a frame of reference. I can't... relate? I dunno. I feel like I'm spinning my wheels, here. I tried going in the opposite direction and said to myself, "What would I want from the people who bullied me?" Like, if one of them was here right now, what would I say? And... The answer is... nothing.
If they didn't have any remorse, there would be no point. If they did feel it, how could they do anything to fix it? If they said "sorry", it wouldn't mean anything. If they tried to make me happy, I don't even know how they could. I can't think of anything that would make me happy, in that situation. I suppose I'd just want to say, "Yeah, you made me an emotional cripple. Nothing to do about it now." Then wander off. I rather think prolonged contact would just... be draining.
So if I can't even figure out what sort of interaction I'd want from my enemies, how the hell am I supposed to figure out what friends like? Like... it'd be the opposite, but I don't have anything to uno reverse. Even looking up guides on how to write it, they give me the general pointers, but they tell me how to MAKE friends, not what friends DO. I can find plenty of guides on how to cynically manipulate people, but not on how to just... be someone's friend. Like... after they become friends, what happens?
I KNOW how to manipulate people, already. I'm trying to write someone LIKABLE, not a manipulative bastard. I know how to get inside someone's head. I know how to get people to come around to my point of view. I have no idea how just be someone people would want to hang around. It feels like being a 'likable friendly guy' is just being a manipulative bastard, except you have a desire for people to be happy and you just put in a lot of continuous effort, but I can't help but think that shouldn't be friendly come... easily?
I look up examples and they... just don't make any sense to me. Take Harry Potter, There were three close friends, right? But it always felt... wrong to me. Maybe it's because Harry was such a self-insert that I just couldn't relate to him? Like any Mary Sue character, people just Love the MC, except for the bad guys. If you hate the MC, you are clearly evil. I dunno... It's hard to explain.
Am I making sense?
TL/DR: If you could provide me with some pointers on how to write people as friends and how they act, that'd be great.