Esper
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I have been writing a story and planned on just stealing a magic system that fits with my ideas, I know a villain's act but that's how I roll, but since there was nothing, I started writing a brand-new system and want help refining it... it isn't complete at this point, but I want outsider views on how it is coming along. to those who wish to help I will be putting it in a spoiler tag as it may get long.
Thanks to those willing to help!
Rings and their uses.
Special Cases:
There is a set of special case rings. Though they are marginally thicker than normal rings, due to them having distinct properties, these rings may be difficult to recognize.
One will see this is a multi-stage spell, using a Single Ring as the base, a Purifying Ring and Inhibitor Line (See Mage Lines for more.). This array is filled with instructions and has a Sigil (See Sigil Marks for more), with the arrangement one can tell this is a containment array, for a lesser mana spirit.
Illustration of Complex magic circle instruction Ring. (Fig 2.)
Used most often within higher level magic circle arrays, an instruction circle is solely dedicated to managing aspects of the array; as in figure 2, Inhibitor Rings and Lines. We have lost most information on the language used within the array and cannot replicate it. However, we understand the purpose of this and many other rings in the full array.
- Single Rings are for containing mana for a spell.
Single Rings are often found near the center of a spell circle, if instructions are given for distributing mana, they are found within a Single Ring structure. Single Rings can be used in conjunction with one another and are often the most unstable when near another Single Ring. Complex spell circles can find a Single Ring has become a Double Ring quickly leading to dangerous outcomes for all involved. Mages often use more than one Single Ring, or an Expulsion Ring in case a Single Ring was tainted in some way.
- Double Rings are for collecting and expelling mana for spells. These are most often used to expel mana to create an effect, however, can be used in more complex spells to collect mana in the air.
- Expulsion Rings: these Double Rings are filled with instructions to create an effect using mana poured into them. They are found to be the most useful rings. Not only used in the effect, but in regulation and control of a spell, and are protection within more complex circles. If implemented into a spell too early an Expulsion Ring can become a ticking timebomb. Best case, the mage has a haywire spell. Worst case, a mage can be drained of all their mana.
- Collection Rings: these Double Rings are empty and are used to collect mana floating in the air to supplement the user’s mana. Like an Expulsion Ring this is a common ring for those worried about Single Ring stability. Used not just to stop mana drain, but also to regulate excess mana lose. Complex circles have more than one such ring as even an experienced mage can have trouble with the mana expense. If implemented incorrectly, and with no instructions leading away from them, a Collection Ring can quickly become dangerous; sucking mana in the air and starving a mages regenerative ability.
Special Cases:
There is a set of special case rings. Though they are marginally thicker than normal rings, due to them having distinct properties, these rings may be difficult to recognize.
- Purifying Rings: These rings could be mistaken for Double Rings because they are marginally thicker. Because of the rampant misidentification forms of this ring have instructions to help inform a reader of its effect. Purifying Rings, as the name suggests, purify mana increasing efficiency in certain points of the circle, amplifying or nullifying effects.
- Inhibitor Rings: These rings could be mistaken for Single Rings because they are marginally thicker. Inhibitor Rings, as the name suggests, inhibit mana flow to certain points while giving structure to others.
One will see this is a multi-stage spell, using a Single Ring as the base, a Purifying Ring and Inhibitor Line (See Mage Lines for more.). This array is filled with instructions and has a Sigil (See Sigil Marks for more), with the arrangement one can tell this is a containment array, for a lesser mana spirit.
Illustration of Complex magic circle instruction Ring. (Fig 2.)
Used most often within higher level magic circle arrays, an instruction circle is solely dedicated to managing aspects of the array; as in figure 2, Inhibitor Rings and Lines. We have lost most information on the language used within the array and cannot replicate it. However, we understand the purpose of this and many other rings in the full array.
Thanks to those willing to help!
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