EternalSunset0
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Hello. First post here, and I'll be asking for some writing tips.
I'm pretty deep into my series already, and I have reached the point where I'm having difficulty expressing emotions and feelings without being repetitive with something I have already written an arc/chapter or two ago.
I know some basic tips like appealing to the senses when describing scenes or environments, but when it comes to how people are feeling, when they're... say, alone in a room, what can you suggest for me to do? The story is written in third person perspective by the way.
Right now, it's very tempting to just say something like "She felt horrible about what happened" but that seemed very "tell-y" and weak as a description. I already used up all sensory descriptions that I know of, and I'd like some tips on how to improve in describing how someone is feeling.
I'm pretty deep into my series already, and I have reached the point where I'm having difficulty expressing emotions and feelings without being repetitive with something I have already written an arc/chapter or two ago.
I know some basic tips like appealing to the senses when describing scenes or environments, but when it comes to how people are feeling, when they're... say, alone in a room, what can you suggest for me to do? The story is written in third person perspective by the way.
Right now, it's very tempting to just say something like "She felt horrible about what happened" but that seemed very "tell-y" and weak as a description. I already used up all sensory descriptions that I know of, and I'd like some tips on how to improve in describing how someone is feeling.