Ooh. nice cover.
Also, f*ckface, what'chu mean by your readers are unresponsive? They gave you plenty of votes. And what're they voting for? Wanting you to improve, dummy.
Does that count as unresponsive?
Yes, I am reading through all the chapters as I type.
Another question:
Did you write this while people are having meet-ups? You wrote these while in the middle of those visits, didn't you?
I'm gonna put my rants of your story here.
These are the rants:
-The word "Maid" already suffices the word "Servant". So, why?
-Somehow, I get the feeling that you're trying to tell the readers that "An American has reincarnated into an Eastern girl's body." Like damn, the MC swears a lot. Are you trying to get him to swear a lot? My guy, Indo-to-English swearing translation is not as easy as google-translating it.
Try other swearing words, or well, harassing words. Such as:
-Dip$hit
-Dumba$$
-Dickhead
-ShittyA$$
-Bitc- Oh wait, that sentence should not be completed.
-Bastard
These are general swear words. Most of the time, you don't need swear words to roast someone. You could harass people with just their appearances.
For instance:
-(To
@BernKatstel) You sneaky little bastard.
-(To
@Prince_Azmiran_Myrian) Screw you, piss-colored dragon!
-(To
@Rhaps) Go see your facial doctor, faceless fairy.
-(To
@Anon2024) Oh look, you're now the sanest dead body in the school! (This is a reference.)
You see the patterns? Good. If you don't, I'll get your mother to snuck all dat info down your brain.
Also, for those that were mentioned. Sorry, not sorry. I was giving someone a few examples.