Hola! I don’t know if this should be posted here, but I’m writing a story (link below) and looking for some constructive feedback/criticism. If you have a few minutes (hours) to spare, would you mind doing this stranger a favour?
I’m looking for feedback in terms of dialogue (how do you feel about the characters through dialogue?) and flow (is it too slow? too fast?), but any and all thought would be greatly appreciated (other than plot related—it’s a slow burn on that front but there’s a lot there you won’t know reading it up until the released chapters).
Have a good day! (:
I’m looking for feedback in terms of dialogue (how do you feel about the characters through dialogue?) and flow (is it too slow? too fast?), but any and all thought would be greatly appreciated (other than plot related—it’s a slow burn on that front but there’s a lot there you won’t know reading it up until the released chapters).
Have a good day! (:
A Single Card
In the Ithular Universe, everybody had Cards—things that, when they started to Manifest, would become actual, well, things. From the most straightforward ones, like tools and animals, to the more abstract concepts, like intelligence or speed. One thing remained true: that everybody would be...
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