TheMonotonePuppet
A Writer With Enthusiasm & A Jester of Christmas!
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There are so many analogies for cuteness, and yet none come to mind.
I have so many obscenely overdone descriptors for cuteness rattling around my head, but none that actually will bring something other than an eyeroll to my readers. I don't want the features to just...
Stand on their own. For example, feline features aren't enough (yes... catgirls are not enough for me). Being small isn't enough. Big eyes, sparkling eyes, kawaii, overdone manners of speaking (~oni-chaaan~), cherubic looks (if you can give me a unique spin on this though, I will gladly take it!!!), etc. None of these are enough.
I have plenty of parody elements for cuteness. That isn't something I'm struggling with. Here's an example of a scene I wrote that makes me feel free/satisfaction/relief:
"Ohhhhhh maaan! These bums are still kickin'! Halle-fuckin'-lujah! Praise be!" I shout to the brilliant blue skies, throwing my hands up with unadulterated joy. Maybe I could just wave my hands in the free cyan skies and?...
Come away with whimsical, airy blue paint on my fingers? The euphoria of making of making a skill...
It feels like feathers curling up within my chest, growing out of my mouth in a white explosion of downy feathers. Such was the power of the relief contained within my exultation.
If I could have something that captures cuteness in a similar way, using your own characters, that would be great! If I could have something to compare the feeling of seeing something cute, with a unique spin on it... something like that!
I have so many obscenely overdone descriptors for cuteness rattling around my head, but none that actually will bring something other than an eyeroll to my readers. I don't want the features to just...
Stand on their own. For example, feline features aren't enough (yes... catgirls are not enough for me). Being small isn't enough. Big eyes, sparkling eyes, kawaii, overdone manners of speaking (~oni-chaaan~), cherubic looks (if you can give me a unique spin on this though, I will gladly take it!!!), etc. None of these are enough.
I have plenty of parody elements for cuteness. That isn't something I'm struggling with. Here's an example of a scene I wrote that makes me feel free/satisfaction/relief:
"Ohhhhhh maaan! These bums are still kickin'! Halle-fuckin'-lujah! Praise be!" I shout to the brilliant blue skies, throwing my hands up with unadulterated joy. Maybe I could just wave my hands in the free cyan skies and?...
Come away with whimsical, airy blue paint on my fingers? The euphoria of making of making a skill...
It feels like feathers curling up within my chest, growing out of my mouth in a white explosion of downy feathers. Such was the power of the relief contained within my exultation.
If I could have something that captures cuteness in a similar way, using your own characters, that would be great! If I could have something to compare the feeling of seeing something cute, with a unique spin on it... something like that!