CheertheSecond
The second coming of CheertheDead
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I personally think it is the most important to make it immersive for the readers. I don't mean just immersive in physical pleasure but in emotional level too.
The character who engaged in the activity must demonstrate their feelings and why they were in such a high stage of emotion due to and for the physical interactions.
The character should feel happy when they held their partner with imaginable explanation for the swelling of emotion.
Sex should not just feel good because of sex. Even when I wrote fictions that are fetishes, for fetishes and by fetishes, I had to implant emotion into that. Technically speaking, if you are a good smut writer, you should have almost no problem writing a smut regardless of whatever sub tags there are in the scene.
I remember discussing necrophilia with my friend and he said he was really saddened by the misunderstood or the wrong approach to art. Instead of focusing on the emotion that he was trying to convey (the feeling of regret for being late to meet a lover, the happiness of reuniting with the lost one), people kept being deviated to the artefacts (which is the corpse and the action that is doing with the corpse). It made a really frustrating experience because humans are flawed and can not come to appreciate art without first being distracted by the surface level that veiled what below even if that veil is paper-thin and is not within the focus of the writing.
However, he did arrive at a matter-of-fact conclusion which is the "don't like don't read" rule. Basically, people held a prejudice against arts because of those paper-thin sugar coat and judged it not for quality but for their preference. However, the people is wrong because if they didn't like you should not read it in the first place. "If you don't like spicy food, sour food, sugary stuff, don't eat them and then mouthing off".
The character who engaged in the activity must demonstrate their feelings and why they were in such a high stage of emotion due to and for the physical interactions.
The character should feel happy when they held their partner with imaginable explanation for the swelling of emotion.
Sex should not just feel good because of sex. Even when I wrote fictions that are fetishes, for fetishes and by fetishes, I had to implant emotion into that. Technically speaking, if you are a good smut writer, you should have almost no problem writing a smut regardless of whatever sub tags there are in the scene.
I remember discussing necrophilia with my friend and he said he was really saddened by the misunderstood or the wrong approach to art. Instead of focusing on the emotion that he was trying to convey (the feeling of regret for being late to meet a lover, the happiness of reuniting with the lost one), people kept being deviated to the artefacts (which is the corpse and the action that is doing with the corpse). It made a really frustrating experience because humans are flawed and can not come to appreciate art without first being distracted by the surface level that veiled what below even if that veil is paper-thin and is not within the focus of the writing.
However, he did arrive at a matter-of-fact conclusion which is the "don't like don't read" rule. Basically, people held a prejudice against arts because of those paper-thin sugar coat and judged it not for quality but for their preference. However, the people is wrong because if they didn't like you should not read it in the first place. "If you don't like spicy food, sour food, sugary stuff, don't eat them and then mouthing off".