Recent content by MarekSusicky

I have a few nitpicks, if ya wanna :) The goal of a story should be to provide enough detail and context for readers to immerse themselves in the story and understand the characters' motivations and actions. The less characters the better (at least in first chapter). The more emotion emanating...

Yes. A lot. Sadly, sometimes I hate how stupid MC can be. Even though from MC point of view everything makes perfect sense, haha.

Woah, this story is so good! Poor 'ol Tim turned sex-beast. Maybe I would add everytime he cracks a joke his power increases even more and if s/he can make evil goddess laugh, s/he will steal her powers. I think this will a new hit like fifty shades of pink.

You inspired me now. Old man Tim was hit by a truck and got reincarnated into a world, where magic was running supreme. But there was a catch - he was in a body of a young girl, although he had a system help and a cheat in form of the more girls loved her, the more powerful she was. --- Too bad...

Yeah, you are right! But... eh, wait. So when my novel is about children who are supposed to salute every morning because the dragon would eat 'em otherwise I disqualify to get a pr? :blob_hide:

I might have something I would love if you could take look at. But proofreader... That's the last stage, when you are only waiting with release for the right moment, right? After it is edited to the oblivion. Welp, then I have nothin'. Haha. --- I know I might be a little out of touch, but what...

Yeah, I used to love his books, I haven't read much lately.

Congrats, that is awesome! ... What? No, no! I'm not jealous... Uhmmm, you are! :blobspearpeek:

:blobspearpeek: I don't know what you are talking about. Don't worry, you neither. :blob_thor: ... hey, I really don't have one on hiatus! Now ...

Right now, I am writing a script for a visual novel along with my story here, so it's interesting. My hopes are that I will release a demo this fall... Does that count? Haha...

Same with me Puppie. I have been writing since I can remember, but that wasn't in english - heck I couldn't even speak in english a few years ago - so the antics of english bothers me a lot. Sometimes I wonder if some random "stupid" sentence I wrote is correct. Try googling tips and you get...

Although it has some flaws, the story is my favorite cliché so I am willing to overlook them. I sent ya PM about some areas of improvement. (Ye, I like the story a lot.)

One day there was a big bang and people got an abbility to cast magic by burning fat. 600 pounds grandmasters amassed weath overnight and after a while unhealthy way of living was the only way how to survive. It got name after the famous meal - McMagic.

This is something that always bugged me, but I can't explain why I can't stick to the outline. So the idea of character sheet scares me! My characters live in a parallel universe and only I have a window leading there in my head and I'm sort of god who can change anything but my characters. So...

I feel you! I love every reader who reads my story, or comments on top of that, and I want to keep the story engaging for them. But my story was going somewhere and I got an... angry... message from someone who didn't like the direction. On the other hand I got a message someone concerned about...