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  1. Gunshot_god

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Thanks for the feedback @OatMush . And yes, English is not my first language. Its my third language. I am constantly trying to improve my language though. After reading your feedback, i realized i should have better word choices for the better enjoyment of the story. For example, They appeared...
  2. Gunshot_god

    Oww you have messaged me here?Thanks for that ๐Ÿ˜Š

    Oww you have messaged me here?Thanks for that ๐Ÿ˜Š
  3. Gunshot_god

    @Anon2024 I asked her and she told me that she will have everyone in the whole kingdom watch...

    @Anon2024 I asked her and she told me that she will have everyone in the whole kingdom watch their deed lol (Veryyyy badass. No way to persuade her QAQ)
  4. Gunshot_god

    @Anon2024 hmm not a chance ! My baby is powerful and cautious, don't trust people easily and...

    @Anon2024 hmm not a chance ! My baby is powerful and cautious, don't trust people easily and kill people who betrayed her. I don't think the NTRed guy can live lol๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Also she is a baddie and only good to me
  5. Gunshot_god

    Help me pick my next story

    Option 4 would be a great one i guess. I like option 1 too, but unless it doesn't have that typical shy, good for nothing princess. About option 2... i Like the trope but only if the whole story is super short like 10 or 15 chapters. You know, misunderstanding is bad for health. About option...
  6. Gunshot_god

    @Anon2024 Lol my mc is a good girl. What abt a packaged NTRing villainess?๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ

    @Anon2024 Lol my mc is a good girl. What abt a packaged NTRing villainess?๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ
  7. Gunshot_god

    School

    Bruhh created a whole rap song out of it๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
  8. Gunshot_god

    @SailusGebel no problem bruhh. Glad that u replied๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    @SailusGebel no problem bruhh. Glad that u replied๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
  9. Gunshot_god

    @SailusGebel Well bro, story primarily focus on martial arts, family love. Absolutely no harem...

    @SailusGebel Well bro, story primarily focus on martial arts, family love. Absolutely no harem! Maybe a little smutty. My lord, idk if this is your cup of tea๐Ÿ˜Š
  10. Gunshot_god

    Who in the world crow-mouthed me ahh๐Ÿค–๐Ÿค– Hehe ehem.. Btw, my new story if you haven't got the...

    Who in the world crow-mouthed me ahh๐Ÿค–๐Ÿค– Hehe ehem.. Btw, my new story if you haven't got the news... https://www.scribblehub.com/series/948594/this-fake-daughter-will-rather-go-to-army-than-scheming-with-you-guys-xianxia/ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Shameless promoter.jpg
  11. Gunshot_god

    How would you feel about someone pointing out typos/grammatical errors in every chapter?

    Woah i would be sooo damn happy if someone did that, considering English is not my first language. I will pray for them hehe๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
  12. Gunshot_god

    My little reading corner. Story feedback. Quality not assured. Opinions reign supreme.

    Ehem Would you like to give review to my new story with only two chapters so far โ˜บ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/948594/this-fake-daughter-will-rather-go-to-army-than-scheming-with-you-guys-xianxia/
  13. Gunshot_god

    Quacky's synopsis review

    Here's my story. I would like to hear from you๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š https://www.scribblehub.com/series/948594/this-fake-daughter-will-rather-go-to-army-than-scheming-with-you-guys-xianxia/
  14. Gunshot_god

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Do you accept my newly started story only with 2 short chapters so far? I just need to know if my starting is interesting๐Ÿ˜Š https://www.scribblehub.com/series/948594/this-fake-daughter-will-rather-go-to-army-than-scheming-with-you-guys-xianxia/
  15. Gunshot_god

    Share your cat pictures!

    Here is two of my grandpa's cat (which means myy cats of course.) He doesn't like to share the chair hehe. (He is looking up to my broad future...๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚) And for the bonus, I will attach two of our goat kids too. (These guys knows to pose more than me) [My grandpa lives in another district...
  16. Gunshot_god

    Someone.... please save me!!!! (My breakfast is giving me murderous eyes along with a certain...

    Someone.... please save me!!!! (My breakfast is giving me murderous eyes along with a certain someone i call mom) NB : I don't like today's breakfast tbh hehe. But it not like i have a choice. Stuffing food like a hamster.jpg
  17. Gunshot_god

    Lol i just wanna be a salted fish. Why is this so hard !?๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ

    Lol i just wanna be a salted fish. Why is this so hard !?๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ
  18. Gunshot_god

    My mom ended my whole career as a video gamer QAQ

    My mom ended my whole career as a video gamer QAQ
  19. Gunshot_god

    Very bad free feedback thread.

    Thank u so much. I will pay more attention to grammar mistakes. I appreciate your help. My lost inspiration is coming back!!!
  20. Gunshot_god

    [temporary closed :: busy writting]๐Ÿ˜ˆRaymann's Free Feedback Shop๐Ÿ˜ˆ

    My story needs some hot oil to burn โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅ. Can u please provide a feedback for my 2 chapters. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/716858/the-deformed-star-in-the-sky/ I appreciate ur help very much.
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