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Sound like Never Die Extra.

My guess is it's because lack of stake, MC have it easy, everything is going well, he's not going to lose an arm or two, he has a higher chance of winning, had never lost his loved one. There's no devil plotting against him, even there is one, the plan never leave a devastating consequence...

Hardships that lead to a happy outcome is guaranteed wholesome.

The lack of subtext in the dialogues could make the character sound robotic/inhuman, but that just my guess since I haven't seen how he write it.

The New Dawn

You mean Kusa? I don't think it a cuss though, since it just meant 'grass', because of how Japanese people type 'wwwwww' as lol in their language, it look like a field of grass thus '草' kusa. To me, it look like he said 'I like water lol'

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On the Internet, that's a wishful thinking. You've a better chance asking your crush out on a date than finding love in this cold place.

You forgot to trim the edge(my fault for making it transparent.), but never mind, I edited a couple of thing, here you go. (I've trimmed the edge for you.)

I hope this help.

If possible, just stick with 3rd person, seeing what you trying to do, maybe try '3rd person limited'.

2nd person, that's an interesting choice, are you writing a CYOA story? When I read it, I was kind of confuse where the protagonist was at, first she was like outside, next thing you know, she was inside a car. At least write "They drag you inside a car." so I know what was happening. Also, I...

Basically, how to do exposition. I believe there's a lot of articles and videos explain how to introduce exposition to a story, just search for it on google or youtube, if you want recommendations i suggest watching Hello Future Me when he discussed the topic in one of his On Writing video on...

As long you don't write "...want feedback..." or over promise about the story, then you're safe from me. Those are the only thing that would make my mouth open.

Yep, I misunderstood the question entirely, I don't know why my brain doing that.

Tell them you're busy and has something important to do, don't need to worry how absurd it is, just tell him you're busy building an army or something. If he doesn't get the message, say that your eyes hurt when you're reading for the past few weeks and tell him you're maybe unable to read his...

Scam Education and Robbery Class, both taught by Mr. Robb Banck