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    Can you give me your opinion of my story?

    It's name is Valiant Phantasm. A fantasy story and one of the first original things Ive written in a long while. So I'm really happy about it and wishing to know what you think about it.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    My first chapter is purely for meeting the characters, the plot doesnt kick until later. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/244424-valiant-phantasm/chapter/254222/
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    How realistic does a zombie apocalypse or post apocalyptic story has to be?

    Well. To be "realistic", zombie apocalypse just cant happen at all. Simply because dead people naturally rots. So if you just trap yourself in a place with enough food for a couple of weeks, the zombie will just rot and rot away until they get so feeble they wont even be able to walk and be a...
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Okay... Ill be blunt. If that wall of text is your synopsis, just delete everything but the first five lines. All the rest can go on the author notes of the first chapter. Having it all on the synopsis t's overwhelming. So please dont. Okay, in my case my synopsis is a bit too short. But my...
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    Simmilar sites and the type of work they focus

    Oh, I head a lot of critiques like that. Aparently the interface is difficult and most popular stories are in the same vein than Twilight. So if you dont post romance stories for women you wont get much attention.
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    Simmilar sites and the type of work they focus

    Hmm, I looked at the terms of some of other sites I found, as CreativeNovels and Moonquill, which offer a certain revenue for views through a non-exclusive license and keeping your rights to your story. This part call my attention, though, "By providing Content to the Service, you grant to...
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    Simmilar sites and the type of work they focus

    Dead in what sense? It didn't look like that to me
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    Simmilar sites and the type of work they focus

    I'm curious about what other websites for original stories are out there. I'm writing something and want to post it in as much sites as I can, but I know must sites have a focus. Here, I saw a lot of Isekai and fantasy stuff, simmilar on Royal Road aparently. In wattpad is mainly romance and YA...
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    About Internal thoughts?

    So must of the time you dont use internal thoughts in the strict sense. But simply leave the narrator explain what the character is thinking/feeling.
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    About Internal thoughts?

    I'm a bit curious about the way of writting and fomatting internal thoughts you use as writters, or those you prefer as readers. Created a little poll so you can vote, and tell me, why do you prefer that method? Considering theres kinda four possible options. Use italics for thoughts, so...
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    Do you ever get one star ratings?

    Eh, you are exageratting. Not that you are wrong per se. But let's say there's a story that is objetively a 4 stars. Maybe even a solid 3 and half. But you aren't objective so you gave it a 5 stars Does that give the right to someone else to say, "This can't have a perfect note, let's vote 1...
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    Writing Looking for terms you dont know or forgot

    A teacher of mine made a lot of jokes about that. He called it the principle of mediocrity.
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    Writing Looking for terms you dont know or forgot

    Thanks! Training grounds was just what I was looking for!
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    Writing Looking for terms you dont know or forgot

    I noticed there was no simmilar threads so I thought it would be a good idea. It's common that while writting, sometimes you want to use a specific word but can't remember or found it no matter how much you try... Or, maybe you are looking to know if there even exist a particular word for a...
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    Readers who declare that they're dropping the series they're reading

    Depending on the reader it can be quite cringey. Like, maybe you made something they didn't like (with reason) and they expressed it politely... But most of the time they just whine and make a rant out of it. At least I, as a reader, if I stop liking something I just stop reading.
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    Sites for free art (CC)?

    I hope this isnt out of place here. You´ll see, I wanted to make a cover for a fantasy novel Im going to post soon. I know how to use editing software to a decent level, but sadly I dont actually have a good pic for the cover. The story in question is original. So to avoid copyright problems...
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    How do you guys deal with not feeling good enough?

    Hmm. Quite a balance between trying to be better... But dont worry too much about it either. Like, lets say you are one those kind of people that compares their writting with their favourite authors and say stuff like "why cant I be as good as this person?!" That shit is bad!! Dont do it! If...
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    cliché love tropes

    You ar like my spirit animal or something because I feel just the same. I just can't endure how abusive they can be. If they are those types of Tsunderes who just are shy and deny her feelings at first, that's fine. I found them kind of adorable. But the moment they start abuse their supossed...
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    Opinions on BL

    I am a bit like Luxican, I prefer shonen ai than yaoi. Almost the same way I prefer shojo ai than yuri. I simply prefer the romantic part itself than the smut that tends to follow. Especially because on the case of yaoi, it can really get a bit rapey in most cases.
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    Thank you a lot!!

    Thank you a lot!!
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