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    As a Yandere Enjoyer

    Same :< that's why I write my own fictions instead. Sick of the psycho yanderes that torture/kill their lover and have one dimensional personalities...
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    I am stuck

    You can use chatGPT to help you out whenever you get stucked. It helped me a lot.
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    Come, tear my smut-with-a-plot litrpg to shreds (will swap feedback).

    Synopsis: I like it! Very good spelling and grammar, as well as an interesting writing style. Not much to nitpick on here except that I found myself having to reread some sentences twice to make sense of it. This might just be my ADHD at work though. Story: I like that you started off with a...
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    Looking for someone to collab with

    We can do it through google docs and brainstorm ideas + write together in real time. I'm looking for someone that is open-minded, fluent in English, active, and likes to write the below genres (see below). Story will preferably be anime/manga inspired, Japanese-based, clean simple writing...
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    can someone check my novel and rate it

    I would suggest downloading something like Grammarly or writing your story on Word for the auto spelling and grammar check. Synopsis: I like that it starts off with a generic introduction ("where swords and magic exist"), and then gives the twist as "but monsters doesn't exist". But then the...
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    Sentence Structure Tip #1

    Everyone probably already knows this one, but I still think it is one of the most helpful advice I've seen so here's for those that haven't seen it:
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    Story Feedback

    "monsters typical found within" — typically "adventures only to be described as epic will occur" — phrasing of sentence seems a bit off. What is this supposed to mean? The synopsis doesn't seem to tell me anything about the story besides the isekai trope. Chapter 1 is a whole block of MC's...
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    Need Feedbacks on my completed Short Story

    Synopsis: Seems like you have some errors with past vs present tense (e.g., "He possessed everything that a man wants(?)", etc.). Descriptions could be better ("wants, that is, a perfect family, lots of money, good health and a good-looking face" -- lots of money can be 'a vast fortune' /...
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    Please point out my mistakes

    Cool idea with the poetic synopsis. Think it could be improved with a bit more information / more lines to draw more readers to the story. At the moment, all I can tell from the synopsis is that MC's been reborn into the entertainment world which doesn't really tell me enough to intrigue me to...
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    Writing Prompt A Yandere story but with a special twist. The Yandere also has a sense of Justice and Mercy or Strong Morals!

    Created here: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/414082-reflected-truths/chapter/414084/
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