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I will try my best doing that thanks for the advice

T Thank you for giving me this advice

Thank you for the comment I really appreciate it and I will keep doing it

thank you that helps a ton

This is my advice: first, what is the intention of your character that causes them to fight? second, what is the condition for the protagonist to win and the look of their surroundings? and they need to be short because no one wants to read a whole chapter of just fighting because it's boring...

can someone read some of my novel chapters and tell me if it is okay or bad thx😊😊😊 https://www.scribblehub.com/series/391369/i-became-the-first-demon-lord-in-another-world-with-my-skill/stats/

tried reding mine https://www.scribblehub.com/series/391369/i-became-the-first-demon-lord-in-another-world-with-my-skill/stats/

Thanks for the suggestion I will try it

I am deeply sorry about my actions and thank you for your help answering my questions it's not that it's just that I want to make my writing readable and not hard and annoying to read novel so I use forum to get advice on what's wrong with my work or writing and my language is not English so I...

Thanks for the help man

I need your help again in imagining the scene in this part of the story: Suddenly, a man appears behind us, wearing a black cloak and bearing scars all over his body. This is my first encounter with this man, but my instincts tell me otherwise. "Well, I didn't expect to find both of you here...

I need your help again in imagining the scene in this part of the story: Suddenly, a man appears behind us, wearing a black cloak and bearing scars all over his body. This is my first encounter with this man, but my instincts tell me otherwise. "Well, I didn't expect to find both of you here...

hello I need your help is this readable or it's annoying to read. Chapter 4: Luck What the hell is this guy? The mere presence of this man in black overcame my fear. Even The little girl beside me falls to her knees when she sees this guy. "I finally tracked you down, stupid slaves. Do you...

Hello, again I am here again to know all my wrong in this one so I am in your care again. Who the hell is he? My fear was overpowered by the mere presence of this man in black. This isn't the first time I've had this thought. When she sees this guy, the little girl beside me falls to her knees...

thank you

hello I am here again but this time I need your help, how can I write a scene where the Mc and his companion got out of a forest then a mysterious guy appeared behind them and also the Mc is a slave and the guy was a slave dealer that is chasing after them. Can you suggest a scene where they...

Well you already know why I posted this like yesterday I tried editing my draft now I need you again to look at it again. 2nd Chapter I've been following this little girl since this morning, but we still haven't arrived at the house she mentioned. I'm currently walking right beside her, and...

okay hello (Again) I am here again to make the whole forum check my work to see if I need to edit it or not. Chapter 2: I have been following this little girl since this morning, but we still haven't arrived at the house she was talking about, I'm currently walking right beside her, and she...

Um hello again I need your help (Again) I need your opinion on which of these two is much better to read. 2nd Chapter: I've been following this little girl since this morning, but we haven't yet arrived at the house she mentioned. I'm walking directly beside her, and she started talking while...

Um hello again I need your help (Again) I need your opinion on which of these two is much better to read. 2nd Chapter: I've been following this little girl since this morning, but we haven't yet arrived at the house she mentioned. I'm walking directly beside her, and she started talking while...