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  1. patbateman123x

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    would appreciate feedback for my story too if u have time . https://www.scribblehub.com/series/519642/the-drifter-and-his-yanderes/
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    How to write a good harem?

    i'd say make the mc interesting so he can bounce off the harem well .Most harems have a super bland mc and while some girls are really good his blandness just ruins the whole book or anime or videogame for that matter . Like as a reader i cant imagine who in their right mind would even like the...
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    Do you plan ahead or write as you go?

    whenever i get an idea for something (it can be as mundane as an action scene , a flashback ,a new yandere character , yandere shticks) id like to include in my story i always make outlines in a word file (since its quite easy to forget )with keywords like serial killer yandere , milf schemer ...
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    To those who like to travel often

    Honestly i don't travel to meet new people . I travel to get away from people . There is just something so peaceful about going on a roadtrip to the mountains while listening to Two Feet or idk Glass Animals?
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    God, my parents are such zoomers.

    How old are you?
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    Are any of you psychos?

    if you see any red on any of my bedsheets , that's cranberry juice .
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    What's the best song to have sex with?

    anything by two feet. The perfect music for sex , late night drives or when you are high .
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    When you are reading an R18 novel and they refer to genitals as little brother and little sister.

    hahahaha . Glad someone mentioned the image . That was actually the hook of my post lol u forgot golden rod
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    When you are reading an R18 novel and they refer to genitals as little brother and little sister.

    these r18 writers are just so distasteful man . I'd take even the heat seeking moisture missile over little brother
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    Who do you like as an mc when you read smut?

    you can't just post my pictures right before i kill someone like that
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    You ever just read those r-18 scenes where the dude is like

    its even worse when they are sticking it in the asshole! the mc : "It's such a beautiful hole . It's tastes so good " *whiffs a sniff* Me : are u sure it doesn't stink man?
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    no luis you are mistaken

    no luis you are mistaken
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    Do you guys still cringe at your own older works when reading back at it?

    kinda reminds me of the romcom sex comedies from the 90s and 80s . The good old American Pie , Risky Business , Cruel Intentions and Fast Times at Ridgemont high days .Shit so bad , they are good .Although Risky Business is still a masterpiece
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    i think my mask of sanity is about to slip

    i think my mask of sanity is about to slip
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    Do you guys still cringe at your own older works when reading back at it?

    its funny because sometimes you read stuff other people write , specific sentences ,like some phrases that have the chunni vibe going on like "dragontamer97 power attack" and you are like "oh thats cringe" , then u read your own stuff from way back when , then you shake your head in shame like...
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    Guys - long hair or short?

    I've had long hair , short hair and very long hair .Personally i like my hair long .The very long kind
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    Free Constructive Review(closed)

    as a native turk whose first language isn't english , you are absolutely right .Thanks for the motivational spark . I think I'll dive right back in again
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