Nice cover drawing. Drawing is nice, but the Novel Logo is just Too unclear and almost subdued by the backgrounds.
I barely see the Logo itself. There's not enough blank sky canvas. And There's no measure for preventing the logo from being overwhelmed by the background drawing.
You may put some kind of backboard/border/any word for helping the logo to be seen without being hidden.
Yeah yeah, flat design is the trend. But logo clarity is will be necessary forever. There's lots of JP light novel measure and other book cover.
Well, it's definitely professional and deserve better praise than just "nice". But I'm bad at both flattery, quality measuring, and critique since it's too biased with my own view.
If my guess is right from judging the story front the cover, I simply hate didn't like stories with boys that have too much friendship with women compared to other boys/man. And most story simply didn't have good reasons for not making male friends for MC.
Especially if there's access to other boys.
Boys normally have at least good relationship with 2-3 close male friend and at least one person as best friend candidate, if the boy didn't get bullied and sullied by his mates.
Especially there's need for adult Idol Man figure for the boy to know what he wants to be in the future. Even if the adult Man is not the teacher/mentor, it's still serve good purpose as a goal to reach.
It doesn't have to be rivalry, just need a proper friendship with some other boys.
Well, that's it.