BenJepheneT
Light Up Gold - Parquet Courts
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I closed my horrible reviews thread because it was mostly for fun and didn't mean much. I'm currently trying to do a lot of writing, but I feel that doing some reading in between will also help me continue forward. I'm going to come out of the "Anonymous" persona a bit and state my preferred genres and tropes which are: Philosophy, emotional characters (doesn't have to be MC) and some comedy.
I actually don't care for Smut all that much unless it's done really well.
I will read any genre and give feedback. Thread will close when I have too many requests to fulfill and re-open when I've caught up and have time.
The Preferred Genres are so you don't expect me to 'love' your story if it's not the genre I like. I will be just as rude as the other guy, but honest.
Anyway, if you'd like me to give some feedback I'm going to be harsh about it as I think @SailusGebel is way more useful to writers trying to improve their craft than a lot of other feedback threads (no offense to others who have them). I'll read the story until I get bored of it before the feedback.
To apply for feedback please post a link to your story. If you don't mention PM I will post it in thread.
I will not post a review/rating on your story because I don't believe in the rating system (actually I can just give you whatever rating you want, but I prefer not to add to my reading list right now).
As per my usual fashion, I'm doing this scattershot style. I'm giving you 3 of my stories, and like a rougelike dungeon, you get to choose which door to proceed and have yourself horribly mutilated.
First door has philosophy, emotional characters, and some semblance of comedy. Caveat is that 95% of the characters are furries. Chapters also hit an average word count of 7k, and the longest chapter lasts around 18k. If you wish to accept the monkey paw, link's down below.
Caninstinct
Shiro believes he's been sent to the wrong school. Rormund Academy: home to only the best of the best. A school so exclusive even its name remains elusive to the public. An establishment where only the wealthiest, smartest, and most athletic students of the world reside. Shiro exhibits none of...
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Second door has philosophy and more comedy, though it's comedy tuned to my taste, so it might horribly backfire. Despite the cover, there's actually only a 40% presence of furries in this. Also, it's smut, but I like to think it's well-written. It's also experimental in which I use various story structures per chapter to see what works and vice versa. Average length'd. Enter if ye dare.
The Problem Store
There was a guy who went by the name of Guy. He lives in a World, and has many stories to tell about it. Stories of relationships, indulgence, brotherhood, reconciliation, women, and skinship. Especially women and skinship. Guy has a lot of stories about women and skinship. You may or...
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Last door has no philosophy nor comedy, but it does have some(?) emotional characters. It's a simple Fallout fanfic that features an original setting and characters, only borrowing the themes of the IP in the barest sense of """fanfic""". BUT, there's a guaranteed 0% presence of furries and a whole lot of paragraphs dedicated to atmosphere/world-building and dialogue. Average length'd. This is the vanilla option, as most people choose this whenever I give them these options.
Kapal
Something tore the old world apart. Nobody knows what, when, why, or how. All that's left are dried remnants of the past and the birth of a new, savage, cruel world. Subjek woke up right at the cusp of a turning age for this desolate landscape; two roaring factions vying...
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Pick your poison, or pick all three if you prefer.
I'll await the fresh torn asshole you'll provide me.