Cover Design

[Astreda]

Hello guys, I'm new here.
And I can design for novel cover

Here's an example :

https://pixeldrain.com/u/tUGT9Rij (the link is just for backup)

https://pixeldrain.com/u/fTHg7666

so, i want to know what's your opinion and what do you think about the cover and if i open commission to design text cover.

And btw Kalliel want the clean version of cover(without footnote) so im uploading the footnote version here, to know if it good or bad.

Also its free copyright btw(the text design). And the design is inspired from English Manwha Cover.

 

[melchi]

I think they look nice.

My only concern would be the high detail and lack of contrast. It might not look so good shrunken down to a thumb nail.

 

[PancakesWitch]

they look nice but the text can't be read on a small thumb nail size, sometimes it sbetter to write somethign simple

 

[tiaf]

my very short introducton into traditional calligraphy taught me that the first/capatilized letters should always the the largest/longest letter

this is not the case here and it kinda bugs me

otherwise it is nice

 

[Astreda]

I think they look nice.

My only concern would be the high detail and lack of contrast. It might not look so good shrunken down to a thumb nail.

Thanks and Yeah, i still trying and it's my first time editing a novel cover, that's why the second i try to add more white shadow in the text.

they look nice but the text can't be read on a small thumb nail size, sometimes it sbetter to write somethign simple

Thanks, and yours is good and easy to read because the clear contrast.

For me your text font doesn't feel right with the beautiful fantasy characters and environment in the background. So for me, probably i will find a stylist font and add glicht effect on it.

my very short introducton into traditional calligraphy taught me that the first/capatilized letters should always the the largest/longest letter

this is not the case here and it kinda bugs me

otherwise it is nice

Oh yeah that's one, yes i feel like that's better. But I'm editing it on my low-end mobile phone with Photo Editor app.

So it's feel like a lot of work than to do it in PC/ Laptop using CorelDraw. And i design it for free anyway

Thanks