SailusGebel
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Yesterday at 1:03 AMGuess I didn't post my story link here. So, here you go
Yesterday at 1:03 AMGuess I didn't post my story link here. So, here you go
Aha-ha. I didn't notice.
Thanks so much for your time! Here's the link to the young adult romance novel that I've been working on: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1103253/call-it-what-you-want/Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel
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All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.
Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.
The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).
Thanks so much for your time! Here's the link to the young adult romance novel that I've been working on: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1103253/call-it-what-you-want/
Posting your feedback in the forum is fine with me.
Ah, okay, sorry to bother you.
Here's mine if you're interested can you give me the feedback via PM
please review mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/...-ability-is-convenient-even-in-another-world/Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel
.
All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.
Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.
The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).
please review mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/...-ability-is-convenient-even-in-another-world/
if it is possible, leave a review on my very story, else just leave it here in this thread. i'll thank you in advance!
I think this thread isn't active anymore. However, someone else was doing story review too:
That's really sad. I posted one, but after reading the critique I think I'll just stick with chatgpt, lol.I think this thread isn't active anymore. However, someone else was doing review swap.