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[MilkAndSausage2]

Would it be okay if there is there is a gay joke? If yes, I would like to give mine a try

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/906410/to-the-roots-of-akasha/

My writing is bad, so I'd like the review in PM. Thank you very much

 

[Feylin]

Hellooo!! Please have a read with mine if you have time! :DD two books but they're only two chapters in.

Heart Over Health

I've been so sickly ever since birth, I never knew why; the doctors, my parents, they never told me the reason. And one day, a doctor came to make a grim announcement. 'Three weeks, you only have three weeks left.' The doctor claimed and at this point, this never...

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The Saint Is The Villain

NOTICE: the art is AI generated (T0T was messing around with it, didn't think it would save itself there even though I didn't save details) Is it a curse or a blessing? The 'saint' being the villain this whole time, the prince being the true male lead, the side...

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I mostly wanna know if its engaging or not;; and that if im explaining things are understandable. I'd also like to know your opinions on the story :DD

 

[Yukine_haru]

I would like you to give mine a try, the story will escalate from chapter 4 and will take an unexpected turn, I hope you will enjoy it

DreamScape: Survival of the Smartest

Araki Ryota, a 16-year-old boy, is involuntarily drawn into an experiment called D.R.E.A.M. There, participants can remember and control their actions in dreams with the help of a pill provided by DreamLink Corp and the company promises the participants/dreamers to grant their wishes if they...

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[PulgaSenpai]

Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel .

All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.

Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.

The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).

If u dont mind read mine, hope my writting doesnt kill you because this was my first ever story i tried to create ahaha. Hope u like it in some way

The Journey of the Illusory Swordsman

Synopsis: In a fantasy world filled with magic and dangers, our protagonist, a young swordsman named Hiro, is born with a special ability. He possesses the unique skill to create an illusion that his sword is immensely powerful, even though in reality, he wields an average-sized sword...

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[A-Thousand-ideas]

New World. Same wars.

New World. Same wars, was named A new era marches. this is the third try on making a novel. please be blunt and honest on how good or bad it is. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A Leader of kind origins...

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Here you go.

 

[ElijahRyne]

Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel .

All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.

Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.

The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).

The Thread Tree (Interactive Story)

An archive of the events surrounding the before, during, and after of the Thread Tree incident of 1547. You are part of the Detective department. You are looking into the Thread Tree incident of 1547. You can send memos to the archive department, the exorcist department, the monastic...

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Could you do said review in thread?

 

[P.R.S]

Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel .

All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.

Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.

The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).

TheEnd: the final planet

In a dying universe a planet stands alone In The End heroes are born and forged, in The End heroes perish and suffer on his hands In the darkness the fires of hope will set us free This is the story of how three friends fought aggainst the evil in...

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No GL,BL or GB

 

[AdOtherwise]

Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel .

All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.

Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.

The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/79766/demonic-fate It's only one chapter. I would appreciate the feedback to be in this thread please and thank you.

 

[cosmicslime]

Okay, we all know the drill, right? RIGHT!? The glorious comeback of reviewer you will never forget(), the ass ripper, the one who bashes newbies, the man, the myth, the legend. Based silusgimbel .

All jokes aside, I have some free time on my hands and I don't see enough operating feedback threads. With M.G.Driver missing, Story_Marc and TheTrinary being busy with vids and their respective jobs, someone has to provide the feedback for newbies.

Important note, my feedback differs from other feedback threads. English is my second language, and I'm a shit author, but what does it mean to you? It means that I will review your stories based on my feelings rather than technicalities, and I will do it as a reader, not as an author. I will give fair, but SUBJECTIVE feedback, and I will be blunt and harsh. Although I'm a lot tamer than I used to be, I will say whatever I think, without sugarcoating my thoughts.

The rules are simple.
1. You post a link to your story.
2. You state where you would like to receive the review\feedback, this thread, or PM. If you don't specify where do you want your feedback, I will post it in this thread.
3. I read your story. After I read as much as I can(I won't force myself to read more than I want), I will reply to you.
4. I won't read and review three genres; GL(girls love\yuri), BL(boys love\yaoi), and GB(gender bender).

Can you review mine? Its fine to leave it in this thread. Kinshura – The Impure Victor | Scribble Hub

 

[Chaperone]

Hey, any feedback is helpful. I don't mind it being posted here.
Thanks for your time.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/783282/the-unusual-shepherd--progression-fantasymonster-tamer/

 

[Luckyplus]

Can you read my chapter 1, I want to know if these are good enough introduction and good hook.

To the unknown - Chapter 1: The beginning | Scribble Hub

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[Notadate]

Obligatory reminder that English is my second language, and this is subjective feedback from a reader. I stopped reading after I finished all the available chapters. The current last chapter is Chapter one, Fall/Fight/Illness - P.1

This is surprisingly good.

still proud of this fact. That I post bullshit so much people expect me to write brainrot also. I do.

 

[DiBltz]

Any feedback would be nice i just started writing on scribble hub and trying to garner an audience

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