Yes awful. And not just the "beta" thing everyone likes to mention. They have numerous other faults. For example, the one I hate the most is their unrealistic hero complex's, that disgusting line of "you should never kill". I drop ANYTHING the moment I see that line. Also, the "powah ov friendshwip" is nauseatingly prevalent in JP titles. You're MC is less than stellar to me but since he's only 10 or 11, I don't make an effort to get annoyed since I would be more annoyed if he WASN'T naive or something in that way. In fact, I find your MC and his childishness/naivety/weak-willed more realistic due to his age than say...if he was some kind of constant cold, calculative, tough guy that I've noticed people keep trying to get you to make him.
I think your MC is fine the way he is for now because he' still not even a teenager yet. NOW, if he gets to be 18 or 19 and he's still the same way he is now, but later on in the story, THEN I'll have complaints. But as for now, your MC being as he is, is passable and understandable. I mean...he's 11-12? What do people want of him? I'd ignore most people complaining about your MC until he's around maybe 15 or 16...but I wouldn't pay TOO MUCH attention until he's at least 19-20. I say 15 or 16 because thats when I expect him to be thoroughly hardened by his experiences. Not the cold-blooded, merciless kind of hardened because you've shown he's kindhearted. BUT, I do expect him to be merciless against ENEMIES. People that you and I both know want nothing more than to harm him or others he cares for, though it wouldn't bother me if he still has a few moments where he chickens out or freaks out since even then....he's still growing. But killing an enemy shouldn't make him hesitate at 15 or 16
However, by 19-20 years of age, he HAS to have already figured himself out by this point in the story. He should be decisive. Kind to his loved ones and friends, but cruel to his enemies. If he hadn't been through as much as he has with what you've written, and it instead, happened later in his life, I would expect him to potentially forgive a few people even if they don't deserve it. But since he's lost his so much, and seen so much as such a young age, he HAS to have matured faster because psychologically,. he wasn't given a choice. Realistically, he'd be more cruel to enemies since things happened to him so early in life, therefore he's had more time to grow accustomed to dealing with them quickly and efficiently. (This is also why I avoid anything with a "you should not kill line, because this is not a realistic response to someone trying to kill you or your loved ones and I don't believe for a second you will actually find someone willing to take this stance after the villains has gutted someone he/she cares about right in front of them. Though JP authors would like you to believe its possible....its not...unless they are arealdy submissive, defeated, cowards...or something else SIMILAR)
He also needs some kind of mental scar, or some kind of psychological "tic", something that expresses the kind of mental damage that has been done to him from his violent childhood. FOr example....maybe he is more likely to become distrustful and more easily angered and violent towars gnomes/dwarves/short people etc. "due to past experiences regarding traumatic events", hint hint, even if he's sorry and apologetic about it later on. We don't age with no consequences for what has happened to us even though we have prevailed and defeated our enemies, internal or external. There are always scars and reminders of what has happened to us that remind of us of where we have come from and what we have experienced.
Also,, for anyone reading this, this is me making examples and then speaking directly to
@ForestDweller about his MC. It's not really anything to do with the rest of the thread. I was specifically responding to ForestDweller about his MC, so unless you've read his story, this response should not concern you or anyone else enough to respond to it.