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[LilTV1155]

@Ai-chan , what if the Victim was accidentally killed via surprise backstab, but then later discovered and horribly mutiliated by someone with the worst grudge to tamper with evidences?

If P stabbed V by accident but panicked and ran away.

But V is still barely alive when P left. Then the real killer with worst grudge and desperation come and find his boy before others.

The killer see V is alive and decided to off him off. With same knife stab, but deeper.

Then the killer's accomplice saw the true murder and wanted to cover up for the killer.

That accomplice chose to tamper with corpses and dump some fake evidences pointing at someone else. Most of clues pointing at the Cameron, the scapegoat.

Another witness saw the cover up and the body. But that person chose not to report it until he decided to transform the crime scene into a locked room and went back into his room wit other people for alibis. Cause he could be suspected for finding body first.

And that accomplice screamed at the discovery to make alibis for the killer and themselves. That's where body found by everyone.

Everyone was about celebrate the asshole murder until you showed up. Unexpected and invited to the party by the victim for no reasons.

When you was invited. No one expect you to be a former retired officer. Now it's up to you, a former police detective to reveal the truth of this case.

So what did ya think?

 

[greyblob]

As for the murder method, Ai-chan has it decided on and tested. The murder method is simple and crude, but it works with about 30% failure rate. But that's okay, because as long as nobody is around, the locked room method can be attempted over and over until it succeeds.

so what is it?

 

[Ai-chan]

@Ai-chan , what if the Victim was accidentally killed via surprise backstab, but then later discovered and horribly mutiliated by someone with the worst grudge to tamper with evidences?

If P stabbed V by accident but tried to cover it up, by disposing evidences.

But V is alive when P left. Then the real killer with worst grudge and desperation come and find his boy before others.

The killer see V is alive and decided to off him off. Like broken glass shard in same knife stab wound?

Then the killer's accomplice saw the true murder and wanted to cover up for the killer.

That accomplice chose to tamper with corpses and dump some fake evidence pointing at someone else.

And that accomplice screamed at the discovery to make alibis for the real killer and themselves.

So what did ya think?

It sounds reasonable on paper, Ai-chan will need to think about how it will work. But it won't be for this story. Ai-chan wants the first story to be simpler so that people can get into it easier. Let's face it, how many of us can remember the plot of a multi-chapter murder mystery? It will be even worse for this story since it's a CYOA and not a typical story.

But thanks for the suggestion, Ai-chan will probably adapt this for future stories.

 

[LilTV1155]

Ai-chan wants the first story to be simpler so that people can get into it easier.

Since it was an accidental stab.
Then how about this?

They were fucking around too much. Dirty stuffs on floor icky and sticky.

Killer is a total klutz and walking hazard. She came to do her job only to slip on her slick clothes on floor while peeling an apple with a knife.

Killer go down. Knife and apple slices go flying.

Victim forgot to dry himself and stepped on his sweat/cum/water then slipped.

Victim go down. Hit face against HARD floor with a boner on and get KO. Knife strike.

Stab through the back of victim. Killer panicked. Victim alive, but killer learned truth then get batshit crazy and pushed the stab deeper.

Killer go clean up the clues and faked alibi and locked room via work privileges. And etc.

Real killer? Victim's dirty fluid.

 

[Ai-chan]

so what is it?

Too much of a spoiler to explain, but Ai-chan can say that it involves the use of the air duct, a string and the very nature of the dead bolt itself.

 

[LilTV1155]

Now i wonder if the Victim was ever found woth his pant down or sort of naked when he died.
Gt clothes? Let burn it!

 

[Ai-chan]

Now i wonder if the Victim was ever found woth his pant down or sort of naked when he died.
Gt clothes? Let burn it!

He was found in his shorts and night shirt. There's a puddle of water on the mahogany floor under the body, and his shirt was a little moist where it touch or is near the wet floor. The blood on the knife has congealed by the time he's found.

 

[doravg]

Force-feed John toothpaste. A tube will kill him, and it will be in line with the fact that he is rude. Wash away that rude mouth of his for good.

 

[LilTV1155]

Arsenic and alcohol and Viagra?

 

[Toripuru-S]

hmm.....

I think the motive should loop back around to the assault of that high school girl in some way. The girl could've been the daughter of one of the suspects, and/or that girl IS one of the suspects (a now older Penelope by the time the story begins, for example). I think you said somewhere that John Spats got off scot-free after the arrest. Well, what if the Retired Policeman wasn't the only one bothered by that. The murder could simply be the classic end result of a years long bottled up grudge...or one might think that's the case ....could be a red herring to throw off suspicion from the real culprit who had a different motive.