VormiamSundrake
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I have only written a few fight scenes up until now and although I don't think I am good at it, I don't think I did bad either. My issue at the moment is that I am writing a fight between two characters and neither are able to speak. When I went back and read the chapter, the entire structure of the page was just paragraph after paragraph with no shorter sentences or dialog to break it up, and it seemed very repetitive. Does anyone have any tips on how to fix this?