Suzumiya
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Given no context, I'm curious if this paragraph makes enough sense.
I've got some ideas for things that might be awkward, e.g. "Theory of Anti-Magic Compositions," but I'm not sure.
I'd really appreciate fresh eyes, if anybody would lend them.
Fed upon misery and desperation, some people gave up. Others struggled against circumstance. Randy did what he was told. He was miserable for it. When the angel appeared in front of him, it stopped time for the two of them. Such magics were mundanely unknowable; and Randy’s old misery was awash with new surprise. After all there was no precedent for it. To compose magic, one must draw upon their own will and memory to forcefully recreate an experience. Yet, no matter how real it seemed, magic was illusory. When in conflict, the more powerful will or memory overwrites the lesser. Such was the prevalent Theory of Anti-Magic Compositions and explained why powerful magic items, politicians and the like shrugged off any petty attempt at harming them.
I've got some ideas for things that might be awkward, e.g. "Theory of Anti-Magic Compositions," but I'm not sure.
I'd really appreciate fresh eyes, if anybody would lend them.