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[AkalE]

The Ultimate System Wielder

The edges of time and space met in a single place, Earth. Soon, terror and chaos reign on the whole world as new gates opened followed by a flood of beasts and monsters. The gates rattled the whole world, letting it taste massive destruction. The world map as everyone now...

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Done. :)

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/131121/transmigrated-into-a-nobles-beaten-son/

I hope this isn't much trouble as well

Done :)

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I wasn't getting notified for this thread. Will get through the backlog now...

 

[Tessa_Renalds]

If you’re still reviewing, I have my story that I’ve been working on for some time:

The Relic Stones

 

[samsarawithwords]

I'll take a public review if you get the time. They're in my sig. Thanks!

 

[AkalE]

Can you give me an honest and public review? I would appreciate that!

Crash Landing

Aria Averell is going to participate in the 59th Annual Capability Contest this year, having turned 8 not too long ago. But something goes wrong, and she has to survive by herself in a planet she had never been on before. She almost kills a member of a strange cult- and...

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Any feedback would be good :D

hey. I really enjoyed the premise of your story. It is a good read and will only get better as you continue, I am sure.

 

[MoMoKushBear]

If you are still doing reviews. Here's my novel. It's an action/adventure novel. A public honest review is good with me.

Wandering the World

Stan, Dariüse, and Quiet are three friends reunited through the death of Stan's wife. This tragedy leads them on a journey around the world to not only discover themselves, but also how they fit into the world around them. Stan wants revenge against the powers that be, but who...

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The year is 2028 it's been 9 years since the Great War that saw most of the world nuked. A world government has now been set up to prevent anymore wars. After a tragic event Stan is seeking revenge, but against who? Find out more about this crazy world with Stan and his two homies, Dariűse, and Quiet. Who have their own beefs with this crazy world they live in.

 

[HMiruko]

It's still on the early phases, but i'd appreciate it if you can give mine a look.

Summoned by a Demon Lord

Rihoku wasn’t having the greatest life on Earth. Granted, he wasn’t having the worst one either. His parents, wealthy and influential enough to bribe his school, left him uncared for. His friends abandoned him after learning about his parents' bribery. Rihoku was an outcast ever since. Trapped...

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[rosseaye]

Hello, I want an honest review DMed please. I have only 6 parts as of the moment. Please review mine thank you!

The Vampire’s Butler

Plunging into the world of euphoria and violence lies a society where vampires, half-bloods and humans live in peace with disturbing secrets. Coming from a wealthy vampire family, the cold and cruel Cecilia Buandiller has finally turned the age of 121, the legal age where she can finally...

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[AmericanWeeb]

My Mononohare needs some reviews. ;-;

 

[Shiver]

If you're still looking for things to fill your list, i'd appreciate honest and public. Need feedback to improve.
cheers.

Shift

'I would sacrifice anything for my family.' This is something which heroes often shout in defiance of some great evil in stories and movies. But how would you deal with being one of the ones the 'hero' sacrifices? Alana Sheehan is a woman in her mid-twenties who returned to...

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[Seerier]

Just starting, but any honest and DM reviews would be greatly appreciated!

A Love In Time Save Nine Lives

A meaningful death is better than living a loveless life. He was the thorn that had stuck on to her. In life I'm yours, in death I'm still yours. As a wandering spirit, Qi Xiang never regretted her choice. She rather be the swaying lights on a candle that could...

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[AdorableDumpling]

Hua Yang

When the haitang flowers are in full bloom and the sky is dyed crimson red... if a pair of hands as delicate as petals, was to untie the stripe ribbons, then I, in my best gown, will open the black umbrella for eternity.

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I will appreciate if someone could check it out ❤

 

[clover2218]

Consider mine if you're still doing this...

Viewpoint-Bloom

[Check out my discord server at https://discord.gg/B3HMzFg ... This is the story of Chitra. A girl born blind, living her life in a world of darkness. This is a story of her and Finitum. The unique full-dive VRMMORPG that brought a new beginning to her life, brought...

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[Joshimitsu]

Here's mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/166490/gaijin/

I'd appreciate a completely honest review. Thanks for doing this! :)

P.S. Can someone please tell me how to share your story in the blue quote box like every one else seems to be doing? I can't figure out how to do it.

 

[Impurrfectionist]

Hi AkalE
If you are still motivated, please read mine. It is my first trial in writing, so not sure if you will like it or not. If you do, leave an honest review

Lost in the Echo

Wanting to leave his former life behind, Aarav was on his way to the United States when his flight crashed. Regaining consciousness, he realized he was not on Earth but a different planet, a different world where days and nights were much longer, plants and animals were something never seen...

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Synopsis:
Aarav was on his way to the United States when his plane crashed. After regaining consciousness, he realized he was not on Earth but a different planet. He was a former military officer. Surviving in the harsh territory was not an issue for him. But there were other survivors with him. Other survivors included a hard-working doctor and his family of four, a chatter-box archaeologist and his son, a group of the Korean boy band, a Japanese student, a pilot, few air hostesses, a group of British youngsters and many normal salary workers. They were aided by the natives of the planet and were suggested to go to Elysium, a magically and technologically advanced planet where dreams come true. To reach Elysium, they were faced with many ups and downs. They get betrayed, scammed, stranded, and even lost their lives. They chose various paths to reach their goal, to get back home.

 

[AkalE]

Done with the review! Amazing story, had a fun time reading.

The Lone Macaw

The moment the dying Aki opens his eyes, he is shocked. Not his hospice room but green meadows, blue sky and the villages of his favorite MMO await him. A fever dream? Or a new lease of life? To Aki it’s a chance to correct the story line he...

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I would also take an honest review... at least if its better than 1 Star :D

 

[Nahrenne]

Done with the review! Amazing story, had a fun time reading.

Don't forget to update your opening post so people know how far down the list you are.
>w<

P.S. Can someone please tell me how to share your story in the blue quote box like every one else seems to be doing? I can't figure out how to do it.

Isn't it just copy+paste the link into the post?
*tilts head*

X

 

[AkalE]

I cannot review all the stories.
So instead I can offer this, the first ones to review any of these stories, I will review theirs on priority.
1. Dragon God Wants to Go to Earth
2. F:Ran
3. Destruction Angel Summoned From Being Dead For 500 Years Finds Love

Other than that,

I currently have my story set for daily updates until I catch up to my current chapter (so until the 24th) but an honest review would be amazing when/if you are able to get to it:

The Nephlim Trilogy

It starts when someone takes a life that was never theirs to take. It ends when every shard drowns and nothing remains of what they once knew. Thirteen years ago there was a massacre; a witch hunt of the worst kind with the ashes of innocents falling from the sky....

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(The long version can be found here)
It can be private or public- I am just trying to figure out what works/doesn't work, if anything is confusing or needs clarification, or anything that I can improve on.

Either weay! You are doing a wonderful thing and I'm sure everyone appreciates you :)

I would love a review if you're still doing them!

Isekai Inc.

Malarie hates being a 'goddess'. Her job is simple: reincarnate people into their worst possible lives, and make them suffer to entertain her immortal bosses. However, Malarie refuses to do that. As she navigates the cutthroat world of corporate Isekai, Malarie tries to help people make...

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I am done with them. :)
All the best and thanks for the amazing stories!!

 

[yunano34a1]

I mostly spend my time drawing and this is my first series so please read it! It really means a lot to me when someone managed to know a bit of what I want to express.

You can either give a public or DM review. Thanks for being interested!

The Key To Seven Grimoires Defiles Evil

After a rampant disappearance of young people, A notorious serial killer is terrorizing the augmented virtual reality industry by killing people in-game and in real life. That stopped when the killer mysteriously vanished and was sent into another world. Gevanni is an odd highschooler raised in...

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[LostLibrarian]

Done with the review! Amazing story, had a fun time reading.

Thanks for your comments and review =)

 

[Ankur_93]

An honest and public review, if you will.
A World of Monsters