Rating system:
Grammar, rated 5
Spelling, rated 4
Plot, rated 4
characterization, rated 4
Enjoyment, rated 5
4.4 / 5
Your grammar is top-notch. There are a few minor spelling mistakes but most are rare and hard to notice. The plot is amazing but you could use a better hook within the first few chapters. Mostly it is just lore and character introductions. That said, all of these are really well done as the characters are absolutely amazing with great introspective views into their values as people. I highly enjoyed it and would absolutely keep reading it.