Kaze_NG
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Hello,
since I started writing a few months ago, I encountered a problem I never thought existed.
I'm talking about the clarity of the references of (relative-) pronouns.
For example: '... It was the red-haired girl standing behind the blonde who caught his eye.'
Is it clear who the 'who' in that sentence refers to, or should I rewrite this sentence, or am I overcomplicating things?
In my opinion, it is clear that 'who' refers to the red-haired girl, as the other option wouldn't make any sense.
Sorry if my question sounds stupid.
since I started writing a few months ago, I encountered a problem I never thought existed.
I'm talking about the clarity of the references of (relative-) pronouns.
For example: '... It was the red-haired girl standing behind the blonde who caught his eye.'
Is it clear who the 'who' in that sentence refers to, or should I rewrite this sentence, or am I overcomplicating things?
In my opinion, it is clear that 'who' refers to the red-haired girl, as the other option wouldn't make any sense.
Sorry if my question sounds stupid.