Reviews are in need.

[MyukiMruieast]

There's this guild named school, it had a new quest today which was to draw about the effects of drugs (good and bad) and I had ta drafts but my mother picked this one, its incomplete for the moment and I needed a bit help on what more should I improve. Most of all, I need a review about it — this would help a lot.

The two are supposed to be fairies (one is a flower fairy while the other one is a poison fairy) and I decided to put the drugs inside their wings but it looked strange (awfully).

 

[tiaf]

Give Poison fairy some bruises from continuous needle pokes (where the artery is) as well as a cheap plastic bag (see trough for more effect) with used syringe in it.

her skin also has to be more ash and full of wrinkles, it can’t look so peachy healthy

maybe also add some white powder lingering in the air?

idk which drug you want to use as example

Could also put a cigarette behind her ear or in the mouth, or draw wings poured over with alcohol?

…now I suddenly have the vision of ice wings which mirror different drugs in every scale

also make her dress black maybe also her teeth? Still looks too bright for representing poison

 

[Amok]

420 flower fairy

 

[MyukiMruieast]

Ah...

Give Poison fairy some bruises from continuous needle pokes (where the artery is) as well as a cheap plastic bag (see trough for more effect) with used syringe in it.

her skin also has to be more ash and full of wrinkles, it can’t look so peachy healthy

maybe also add some white powder lingering in the air?

idk which drug you want to use as example

Could also put a cigarette behind her ear or in the mouth, or draw wings poured over with alcohol?

…now I suddenly have the vision of ice wings which mirror different drugs in every scale

also make her dress black maybe also her teeth? Still looks too bright for representing poison

Fairy on drug abuse.
Them.

 

[Daitengu]

I heard the quest, but all I could think of is a joke. You could just not do the assignment and claim it as abstract art expressing the memory loss and having of 'other' priorities associated with drug use.

 

[whitesculptor]

Since you're going as far as to color it, white "angelic as possible wings" vs black "with red dots, or even veins flowing through.

 

[MyukiMruieast]

I heard the quest, but all I could think of is a joke. You could just not do the assignment and claim it as abstract art expressing the memory loss and having of 'other' priorities associated with drug use.

I can't do that, my mother's asian and she puts my grades as a top priority. And the quest was to draw a poster.

Since you're going as far as to color it, white "angelic as possible wings" vs black "with red dots, or even veins flowing through.

Oohhhh, ok, ok. I'll do that...lemme just Doodle it

 

[greyblob]

make her eyes dull. add bags under them. sunken cheeks. paler skin. needle marks. and yellower teeth

 

[MyukiMruieast]

Lol, lol

 

[Motsu]

Uh, that's nice. Time to get back to work.

 

[Temple]

Pretty cool

 

[BenJepheneT]

Lol, lolView attachment 11403

Holy fuck this looks great.

I rarely comment on other art posts. This compelled me. My favourite art troupes are split half disparities and this didn't just tickle that bias; it took me in for a one-night stand and provided morning breakfast aftercare.

Keep it up.

 

[Amok]

Lol, lolView attachment 11403

I like both versions, but this one is exactly what you need RE: OP... on the left you have composed serenity, almost a hazy look, on the right you have a visceral being in constant frantic rabid motion. the red and blue veins in wings really gives it that creepy anatomical model feel.