You...You, why did you have me review one of your stories? I decided to read The Orca's Serenade and I must say it was...ummm...perfect?
The characters, the premise, the formatting, the dialogue, the descriptions, the settings, it felt like I was reading a real, published novel. I don't think it gets much better than what you wrote. I know it sounds redundant, but I just want you to know that I am SO impressed by your writing.
Normally I stray from GL, but I've always had a liking for mermaids, and I must say this did not disappoint. Of course, I don't have the time to read through the entire thing, but I read up to chapter 8 + the epilogue, and honestly, I couldn't fine any problems to critique. Arguably one of the top 3 books I've ever read on scribble, and that's amazing considering my dislike for gl.
I've seen the whole captured person to friends with captor type thing before, several times, but you manage to tell it so well.
This is one of the few stories where the pov change is acceptable, and I actually look forward to the next chapter for the pov switches.
All in all, it's very hard to point out any mistakes. What we have here is a 6/5 story that deserves so much more attention. This belongs on a pedestal in my library, as one of my best reads.
Style Score: 10
Story Score: 9.5
Grammar Score: 10
Character Score: 9.5
Overall Score: 9.8