It looks like letter S- Wait a minute...
I think it needs to have the jagged corner of the upper skin just like your cover art
And the color isn't consistent; you know the front underbelly that is dark blue? Try making it light one and the upper skin that is light should be dark.
Try making it like and maybe it could work? Anyways the thing just doesn't look much like the snake on your cover...
Edit: oh yeah, you forgot the snake tongue
Hmmm yeah, It's already the object that's not in the center of the composition, it's also smaller, so I either have to change the color or move it to different position. Hmmm. Maybe I should put its part of the neck to the front, with it, and then change colors to brighter ones. Or I could just darken most of the body to make it more mysterious.To me, the head doesn’t pop-out enough when compared to the rest of its body. Though that could be intentional, as the body always draws my attention which in turn makes me notice its shape that looks vaguely like the infinity symbol.
If that’s what you’re going for, then that’s a perfect pic.
I think the head needs to pop out more or be more emphasized.
I think the fang inside doesn't stand out, the contrast between fangs and mouth in general.
It's fine, apart from the fact that the snake's body looks like a mebius ribbon. The colouring is strange, man.
Honestly, big part of that is compression. Facts of life I guess.I think the fang inside doesn't stand out, the contrast between fangs and mouth in general.