Indicterra
Five little monkeys jumping on the bed 🎶
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I was just wondering what you guys think
I dunno. I personally don't think it matters. Good smut is good smut. The only thing I find that annoys me perspective wise, in regards to smut, is being jerked into the female POV. I just don't get it. Do other guys actually find that engaging? Do women like smut from the POV of dudes?For smut
personally, i like to READ first pov
(but also HARDER to write so cant blame authors for this choice)
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I like multiple pov whether it be story, or smut. Always was curious about what going through other person head and how they view Mc asI dunno. I personally don't think it matters. Good smut is good smut. The only thing I find that annoys me perspective wise, in regards to smut, is being jerked into the female POV. I just don't get it. Do other guys actually find that engaging? Do women like smut from the POV of dudes?
For smut
personally, i like to READ first pov
(but also HARDER to write so cant blame authors for this choice)
That's me xDTL;DR - The setting is deep, the characters are great, but the pace is gacial.
This is one of the most in-depth Pokemon mechanics dives I've seen. Seriously, the settings details from the story alone (not even counting the things that must be in the autor's head) would be enough to make Pokemon: The (T)RPG game and have thousands enjoy it. Solid work right here.
The world-building is on point. The events from games all have meaning and new take on them. The great mystery of non-aging Ash is solved. The world feels alive and real. We have reasons for why Pokemon would want to have trainers. We have reasons for why only six Pokemon are with you. Why teenagers beat seasoned veterans in Gyms. Legendaries. Pokemon sentinence. You name it, it's there - Pokemon world made realistic without loosing it's canonical charms.
If you are a Pokemon fan, here come your favorite characters from mutliple games, interacting with each other and living together. Great job on that.
With that brilliance comes the pacing... issue? Not really an issue for me, but for a lot of people, it could be. The story is character driven. And there are a lot of characters. They all feel alive and real, but that feeling comes with a cost. Exposition through dialog. Talking. Memory recounting. Social media dives. Socializing with Pokemon, teammates, relatives. Ultimate slice-of-life, and while the adventure and the mystery are there, they are slow paced and not a main focus - just a part of young trainer's life (we are at day 26 at 2.1k pages, just to put it into perspective)
Reading is one of the best ways to improve your own writing. So if that works for you, awesome, but probably not the best advice for new writers.First, let me tell you that I DO NOT READ.
Wrong you, you. Unless explicitly specified just saying "2nd person" normally means singular, not plural. You may sit down again and correct your homework.The best POV is second person future tense. You will all die.
No, this is second person plural. Even better always use “you all”Wrong you, you. Unless explicitly specified just saying "2nd person" normally means singular, not plural. You may sit down again and correct your homework.
Basic rule of dumb seems to be to use 1st person for personal and/or unreliable or biased narration and 3rd for more "zoomed-out" narration or for works where there are multiple POVs.