This one is kind of depressing.
I have nightmares from an incident back in the past when I went on a trip to Asia. In one of the countries I visited, the perpetrator got away because of socioeconomic conditions while the victim died. I didn't know how to feel because the justice was so broken that when I returned home I kept reading history books about
why this was the result? Why could it have not been a different result? Why did this poor kid— probably in his teens— have to die from something that was clearly the perpetrator's fault? I slowly understood things from the different cultures, religions, traditions, castes, etc. that I wanted to talk about it one day but then was not the time.
Reading web-novels years later, I couldn't help but feel that some of the violence was often just glossed over, or the battles were either skipped or lacked the proper perspective of the average fighter. Or that the society in those books felt either a bit too idealistic or of only one shade. Maybe I read the wrong types of novels. But I remembered the kid from my nightmare two years ago and I decided that I had to write
something.
My writing is terrible for the moment. I admit that whole-heartedly. I just started wiritng a few months ago. But, I hope to improve quickly so I can tell this story of someone from our World being sent back to a World full of intolerance and trying to change it for the
This one is kind of depressing.
I have nightmares from an incident back in the past when I went on a trip to Asia. In one of the countries I visited, the perpetrator got away because of socioeconomic conditions while the victim died. I didn't know how to feel because the justice was so broken that when I returned home I kept reading history books about why this was the result? Why could it have not been a different result? Why did this poor kid— probably in his teens— have to die from something that was clearly the perpetrator's fault? I slowly understood things from the different cultures, religions, traditions, castes, etc. that I wanted to talk about it one day but then was not the time.
Reading web-novels years later, I couldn't help but feel that some of the violence was often just glossed over, or the battles were either skipped or lacked the proper perspective of the average fighter. Or that the society in those books felt either a bit too idealistic or of only one shade. Maybe I read the wrong types of novels. But I remembered the kid from my nightmare two years ago and I decided that I had to write something.
My writing is terrible for the moment. I admit that whole-heartedly. I just started wiritng a few months ago. But, I hope to improve quickly so I can tell this story of someone from our World being sent back to a World full of intolerance and trying to change it for the better.
I really look forward to reading you’re novel when you’re ready! It sounds really good and when it comes to battles and issues of society I agree that it is glossed over, which is usually because the writer mainly wants to focus on the protagonists viewpoint. I feel like you’re novel will be amazing and raw!
I wish you luck! ☺