Zirrboy
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Just look at a piece of paper and start writing. Kek
Still waiting for another chapter to go over
Just look at a piece of paper and start writing. Kek
I think I am doing decent about that by keeping the main team diverse with each character having an ability and combat style others don't have.Diversity is the key, don't just have one kind of power. Have smart people, strong people, sneaky people, and many different types of strength. Having every battle just be a punch-out causes the battles to feel the same.
Don’t forgot to have her mysterious twin brother who was also experimented on to be on the aliens side with no memories.Dont forget the mysterious hot girl that ends up being part alien due to some experiment, there is always one of those.
I'm working on it as we speak.View attachment 11229
Still waiting for another chapter to go over
Since it's a Battle Academy genre, put in actual lessons. Tons of stories with school arcs (Battle Academy and not) kind of forget the lessons. Sure, there are a few lessons at the start, but eventually, the "school" aspect is forgotten. Have class scenes, and then the battle scenes will be the application of the lessons. More often than not, class scenes are just used to show off that the MC is the best ever, even better than the teacher, and then there are no other class scenes after that. Don't make class scenes just an avenue for the MC to show off. If this is a serious Battle Academy, then the teachers should be badass people that knows their shit. Tldr, don't forget the Academy part.
I can't really think of any right now, and that's mostly because all class scenes I can recall in web/light novels, manga, anime etc. are all about the MC just showing off in class. Harry Potter books is good on the exposition side and worldbuilding side of classes though.(if you have one, I'll gladly read it)
Write something like Masou Gakuen HxH.
But you will get dem views with extra boba.Just a bit too much ecchi. I mean every amount of boba is good but that's just a bit too much boba.
Unfortunately I don't think I can help the OP, especially if it's a serious-ish setting lol@HokuouTenrou might be able to help