Greetings, I need help determining if this would be one captivating opening line to a novel.
"She didn't pull him out by the dog collar and kiss him today, the expectancy made him sad."
"She didn't pull him out by the dog collar and kiss him today, the expectancy made him sad."
The only way how a "Great Unity" happens is if a world wide dictatorship comes to be that causes that all humans are similar enough that they can't hate each other, of course genes that cause rebellious or uncontrollable personalities would have to be exterminated.