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Much appreciated, thank you! I'm glad you liked my tale of Robin and his little buddy, Timothy. I did detect some errors a few weeks...

Good day. It was certainly interesting I read the whole story. This is the score I decided on: Overall: Enjoyable Grammar (5/5)...

I believe I have something that fits nicely into this criteria. I'd love to hear back from you :)...

Hi there. This sounds like just the sort of thing I'm looking for. Here is my story. I look forward to hearing back from you...

Here is my recently edited story. Hopefully you find it intriguing. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

I did originally request some feedback on this, but I deleted it as I realized there was quite a lot of editing I had to do on it first...

Okay, I think I'm finally ready for this. I apologize for deleting my request a few days ago, but I had a lot of work to do based on...

Ah, I apologize. I guess I might have misunderstood. Yes, I suppose I might have neglected to flesh out that particular detail. In the...

I appreciate your insight. This beginning part has changed quite a bit since I first wrote it, but after I received another critique a...

I appreciate this, thank you. I have had previous feedback which was critical over the flashback at the beginning and several other...

Here is my completed story. I believe I've polished it, but feel free to let me know if you do find anything that could be improved...

Here is my recently finished work. I'd greatly appreciate any insight you could offer...

Of course. I know you said you were working on it a couple of weeks ago. I just finished the last chapter.

Hey, I have seen your novel (on my review thread). I am working on a review, it is excellently written :). Just, it might take some...

Here is what I've spent the past year working on. I've posted in several threads over the past couple of months, but only one or two of...