Paul_Tromba
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I use them in sets of three. For example,
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It works out fairly well.
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It works out fairly well.
I used to. Not anymore. I think it is necessary to use Scene Breaks if your chapters are longer and have more than 1 or 2 scenes in them.Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua. Justo donec enim diam vulputate ut pharetra. Nascetur ridiculus mus mauris vitae ultricies. Tempor commodo ullamcorper a lacus vestibulum sed. Eleifend mi in nulla posuere sollicitudin. Egestas tellus rutrum tellus pellentesque eu. Amet facilisis magna etiam tempor orci eu lobortis. Donec ac odio tempor orci. Est pellentesque elit ullamcorper dignissim cras tincidunt lobortis feugiat. Vulputate dignissim suspendisse in est ante. Euismod lacinia at quis risus sed vulputate odio ut. Vel pharetra vel turpis nunc. Vulputate ut pharetra sit amet aliquam id diam maecenas.
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See that asterisk over there? A scene break is a transition between scenes, and it does not have to be an asterisk: it can be a hashtag, three or four periods, or any symbol. Do you use scene breaks in your story?
Same.I use them in sets of three. For example,
* * *
It works out fairly well.
Agreed. I don't think I would want to narrate complete silence till they get somewhere else when I could just focus on another party or skip ahead a bit.Same.
Come to think of it, I've been using these scene breaks a bit without thinking about it, simply out of "common sense". Not that it works very well. My common sense I mean.
If I analyze it, the scene breaks I use them when I don't want to break the... "idea" of the scene and I need to move the location to another one that has been visited before, where telling the transition doesn't make sense so it doesn't distract from the drama/action.
Also even if the other location is not known beforehand, if the character must travel along a route, path or whatever and there is no dialogue with another or internal monologue and I want to mark a passage of time, I would use this device. It would also help to give a sense that the place is distant and build a feeling of isolation, if I go that way.
When Ai-chan used it, Ai-chan used six. Take that, peasant!I use them in sets of three. For example,
* * *
It works out fairly well.
Good thing I'm part French. VIVA LA REVOLUTION!!!!!When Ai-chan used it, Ai-chan used six. Take that, peasant!
Dude straight speaking in dorime amenodid you just write in fucking latin?