Hmmmm I'm thinking something like
X's mind was cloudy. His body was hot and he felt dizzy. He couldn't think straight.
"What are you thinking about? I told you to focus only on me didn't I?", Y said smirking and he pushed his length deeper in making X flinch and moan louder.
"Slower! Go slower! AH!"
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Lol idk I'm really bad at it ;-;
Thank you! I'll try reading and see how it works out. And of course I'm going to read your novel too!
0.0 damn that's pretty good. Got a lil dramatic feel to it
. Thank you for your help! And believe me, your passion is still there!!!