LinMeili
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Hiya! Can I have some feedback about these novel blurbs? Which one would you be likely to click on?
Title: I’m Overpowered but I’ll Let the Hero Do His Thing While I Save the Last Boss
Synopsis 1 (I am currently using this):
Reborn to Rescue a Video Game World! After dying during a worldwide pandemic, nineteen-year-old college student Asteria was given a fresh start in the magical and futuristic world of a popular video game. Her mission: to protect mankind from a forgotten danger. However, shouldn’t the original main character of “Tales of Vesterland” be given his chance to shine? Now, armed with ALL the cheats, she’s decided to let the hero do his thing while she saves the last boss and gets rid of the real villain who’s been hiding behind the scenes. Join this OP adventurer in her hilarious candy-fueled quest to befriend the hero, save the villains, and kick ass!
He thinks he's hot stuff! Sariel has it all: looks, superhuman abilities, and a great fashion sense. Too bad that the process that gave him superpowers has a secret side effect...
Synopsis 2:
Reborn to Rescue a Video Game World! For Asteria, the world of a video game was more complicated than she ever imagined, and being a reincarnated adventurer with ALL the cheats was more challenging than she ever expected. Now, if she can just find some candy and stop the last boss from freaking out, she can survive anything, even a fallen goddess with mind control powers and… those pesky golden slimes! It’s one hilarious crisis after another for Asteria who must juggle the need to befriend the hero and rescue the villains. But now, the time has come to kick some ass! Join this OP adventurer in her hilarious candy-fueled quest to stalk the hero while saving the last boss.
Also starring: Sariel. He thought he had it all - looks, power, and a job he loves. But little does he know that his whole world is about to turned upside down by a little girl...
Title: I’m Overpowered but I’ll Let the Hero Do His Thing While I Save the Last Boss
Synopsis 1 (I am currently using this):
Reborn to Rescue a Video Game World! After dying during a worldwide pandemic, nineteen-year-old college student Asteria was given a fresh start in the magical and futuristic world of a popular video game. Her mission: to protect mankind from a forgotten danger. However, shouldn’t the original main character of “Tales of Vesterland” be given his chance to shine? Now, armed with ALL the cheats, she’s decided to let the hero do his thing while she saves the last boss and gets rid of the real villain who’s been hiding behind the scenes. Join this OP adventurer in her hilarious candy-fueled quest to befriend the hero, save the villains, and kick ass!
He thinks he's hot stuff! Sariel has it all: looks, superhuman abilities, and a great fashion sense. Too bad that the process that gave him superpowers has a secret side effect...
Synopsis 2:
Reborn to Rescue a Video Game World! For Asteria, the world of a video game was more complicated than she ever imagined, and being a reincarnated adventurer with ALL the cheats was more challenging than she ever expected. Now, if she can just find some candy and stop the last boss from freaking out, she can survive anything, even a fallen goddess with mind control powers and… those pesky golden slimes! It’s one hilarious crisis after another for Asteria who must juggle the need to befriend the hero and rescue the villains. But now, the time has come to kick some ass! Join this OP adventurer in her hilarious candy-fueled quest to stalk the hero while saving the last boss.
Also starring: Sariel. He thought he had it all - looks, power, and a job he loves. But little does he know that his whole world is about to turned upside down by a little girl...