ConcubusBunny
Chaotic lewd enby bunny. They/them
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Hey, all. So as you've read in the title for a chapter that's coming up, I'm in a bit of a pickle as it stands right now for a few characters that I have planned for the future.
I have a scene coming up that I'm getting close to writing, but hitting a bit of a snag. I've got a;
As you can see not exactly easy to do with very little time window that I accidentally gave the to have a lasting impression as the main hare in their first introduction into the story before the focus character has to leave for a secret mission for a while.
I want to create a situation where the four people of the main harem are gripping enough in their first introduction to leave them wanting more of them and not less.
As a reader, I know the first impressions aren't everything for a character it's more of how useful they are i the story, but I still feel uncomfortable leaving things as they are now.
Any advice on this matter will be much appreciated.
I have a scene coming up that I'm getting close to writing, but hitting a bit of a snag. I've got a;
- A Nonchalant laid back character that puts difficult situations aside rather than face them.
- A thoughtful kind character that thinks of others other than themself and gets real protective of their friends.
- A nice, kind soul that hides the cold and unforgiving nature hiding underneath all of that bubbly and good natured spirit.
- A rowdy, brash, outlandish character that exudes confidence and thinks everything can be solved by her fists.
I want to create a situation where the four people of the main harem are gripping enough in their first introduction to leave them wanting more of them and not less.
As a reader, I know the first impressions aren't everything for a character it's more of how useful they are i the story, but I still feel uncomfortable leaving things as they are now.
Any advice on this matter will be much appreciated.
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